Student Writer Advice - Issues with my sample dissertation

I just ordered a sample dissertation from them - not only was it 3! days late but not in the correct format.

The worst part is they had the audacity to sent me a paper that did not even investigate the research questions I sent them - rather choosing to make up their own hypothesis for unknown reasons. Moreover, they ignored all the notes/background literature/data/ instructions/ information I provided them (and I sent them all the background literature needed.) No one can argue that it could have been misunderstood in any way - that is if the writer would have taken the time to actually read the instructions and the rest of the material provided by me.

Finally, the writer copy pasted from material I provided, not even trying to paraphrase anything. Useless. BEWARE!

Hello, I have already contacted you, but I haven't heard back from you.

Within 30 minutes after receiving word from the client that she was unhappy with her dissertation, I contacted her to tell her I was sorry for any errors and that I would consult with the writer. I then contacted the writer and sent her the client's exact comments and asked for her position on them. As soon as I hear back, I will email the client again, and will resolve this situation. I am sorry for any errors that occurred, but everyone makes errors. The difference between a scammer and a legitimate service is that the former will never attempt to correct those errors. I will, and always have. For this client to insinuate that I might be a cheat and a liar because mistakes were made is simply unfair and ungrounded.

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For the record, here is your last email I received from you.

Sent: Monday, February 03, 2014 10:23 AM
To: Student Writer Advice
Subject: Re: Sample Dissertation

Hello,

The study specifically stated - that it investigated only heterosexual, males, bachelor students or graduates, UK nationals!!!! However in the dissertation you sent me the writer talks about male and female participants, even goes as far as to state that it was the aim of the study to investigate the difference between male and female participants!!? The main aim was to investigate only males! and that it combined the two research methods. Which has not been done before - the novelty factor of the study.

Further, in the abstract she doesn't even mention that it was a mixed method project or the quantitative part- what the results of this were.

I gave a very clearly outline of what the project was about - see ethical application I sent and all other notes, studies etc. I was very clear what the focus of the study was and what it investigated - which format to use etc.!!!!

Also, she quoted my bachelor thesis word by word in the introduction (aka probably had a look at the ethical application and copy pasted what I wrote there because I used parts of my bachelor introduction there - even worse since she clearly ignored what the study investigating!) and clearly did not look at the recent crime surveys I provided as the numbers changed slightly.

The dissertation is also not structured properly according to APA 6th edition guidelines for a report/dissertation

- not for the quantitative or qualitative result sections
- discussion
- actually all other parts really!

All in all this is not helpful at all, as it does not address the research questions I gave you and does not use the correct format. I provided so much information and background literature that this is really unacceptable. Why did I even give information if it is all ignored?!

This is totally useless!

On 3 February 2014 15:20, Student Writer Advice wrote:

Greetings,

Here it is! She just sent it to me about an hour ago.

She said she will send the PPT this evening.

Again, I am sorry for the delay, and I thank you for your patience!

Sincerely,

Writer Advice