
The Western Countries (including Japan or Australia) are probably the most expensive countries to study, especially if you are a foreign student without much help from the government or without a scholarship. The following is a sample of a scholarship essay instructions you may use to write your own essay and study in the most expensive countries ever (if you manage to get the scholarship ;).
A Scholarship / Admissions Essay On Study Abroad - Example Student Instructions and Comments
Hi writer, hope you are well.
Here are some of my comments, please follow them as well:
1. When u answer the essay question, please respond to the 5 statements that in part (Essay Guidelines).
2. I have attached 7 articles from core course readings that I think useful for answering the question ( focus on articles that have the names " week2 (Hall's article" and week3 and week4". At least 5 articles from them should be used + plus peer reviewed articles from your choices . Totally around 20 to 25.
3. In the introduction part of the essay, introduce the topic issue and then relate it to language, identity and cultural differences. For example, studying abroad means that students will study in different countries that may have diff language, identity and cultures, In the end of the introduction, put a map about what are u going to write about, responding to the 5 statements. For example, in this papers, I will outline a topical issue and justify my interest in this issue, then, I will provide some theoretical background for my discussion and a critical analysis of this issue. Next, some recommendations about the next step will be presented. Finally, I will provide some explanation about why I think studying abroad is an necessary part of any language program.
4. In the body of the essay, use subheadings such as:
- outlining the issue and justification
- theoretical background
- recommendation
- explanation
5. Try to make the essay personal. Ex ( it seems to me that, I think its much , I argue that).
6. Make sure there is no plagiarism at all as my uni is very strict in this issue.
7. follow and abide to the criteria marketing.
8. As the question of essay ask about experience.
Is study abroad a necessary part of a language program?
Comment critically with reference to your own experiences, as well as views of culture identity and language learning from your course readings.
Some of my experience, ( I will write some information about my experience during my studying abroad and u can include them in the essay)
I believe that studying abroad is a necessary part of a language programe, to explain that, Im from Australia, I got a scholarship to do master in Australia which im doing now, I have earned a lot of benefits during my studying abroad which never happen if I do in local Australia uni especially in the area of learning English Language. In Australia, they teach students to be independent learner and search for the information that never happens in Australia, in Australia students just depend on their teachers for learning and never learn by their own self. Also in Aus, students have a freedom to critique, ask questions, that may not happen in Australia because the way of learning here is called ( students' central) while the way in Australia is being " teachers' central) for teaching. In one year , I have improved my English quickly before doing my master which hard to do if I studied English in my country. I have summarized the benefits that I got in the below points.
Academic benefits:Learning in new ways(independent, students' centered, ask questions)- gain language proficiency- language skills. (personal ex).
Cultural benefits:Open widely students' eyes to the world- reflecting students' culture and know about others- problem solvers and team working.
Personal benefits:Increase self-confident, independence and maturity.
Professional benefits:An excellent career- Employers want employee (fluent english, understand different culture)- strong communication ex this presentation.- team work.
So, from my experience , I think that studying abroad is a necessary part of a language program. Finally, I hope to get an excellent work, so I will deal with u again and again. If u have any question or wondering about anything, please let me know. Thanks a lot.