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How the essay industry dynamics reflect a collapsing America: an objective analysis


queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #1
Although WB, Pheelyks and their disciples are forever in an impotent war against ESL players in the essay industry, evidence suggests that the essay industry perfectly reflects what is wrong with the US and, ultimately, why the country will collapse.

Granted, WB has waged numerous battles against ESL operatives-of course with little success. Evidence suggests that for very $1,000 spent in the US for essay services(essays, dissertations etc), about $700 ends up in the pockets of ESL players who are OUTSIDE of the US. This implies that students are actually outsourcing writing services outside their country(US).

The reasons why ESL players are successful are obvious:

a) They know how to design compelling websites powered by powerful CMS.
b) They have fully mastered the art and science of SEO.
c) Unlike their counterparts in the US, they are hungry for success. They put in more hours to promote their websites.
d) They don`t pay taxes hence their inspiration is higher. Once an ESL writer in India charges a student $500, he actually pockets $500.

A US writer like pheelyks must pay taxes to ensure that his government has money to give to `developing countries` like Pakistan, ensuring that kids there can get computers to enable them become the essay industry`s players in the future. Nice. In fact it is comical since once a country like Pakistan fails to meet is fiscal obligations(due to the fact that many of its citizens who get job contracts from the US don`t pay taxes), the good, old US sends billions there.

In short, writing jobs are actually being done outside of the US.

Now, this reflects exactly what is happening in America: companies are outsourcing their jobs to low wage countries like India and China, leaving Americans jobless. As this is happening, the US continues churning out incompetent graduates that cannot be of any economic value to their country.

Eventually, the US will collapse under the weight of its own incompetence, lack of strong moral values, poor upbringing of kids, engaging in meaningless wars that costs billions of dollars, laziness and, importantly, outsourcing jobs that could be done by Americans. Asian companies like Samsung are already elbowing out US jewels like Apple inc.

Although I admire Obama , I don`t think his moderate, please-all policies are what will save America. Unless the country undergoes serious moral revolution, it is doomed.

The US attempted to play the world`s savior; however, instead of using diplomacy, it asserted its supremacy by giving out billions of dollars to regimes that toyed along its lines. These billions could have been used to create jobs for millions of Americans. How absurd is it that even when the US was giving Pakistan billions of dollars to fight `terrorism`, the high priest of global terrorism(OBL) was actually being shielded by Pakistan officials?

Another problem with Americans is that due to them being bombarded with the culture of consumerism, they don`t understand the benefits of saving. They actually survive through credit. A credit culture ultimately destroys a country. In fact, it is the Americans who ignited the global economic crisis through taking mortgages that they couldn`t afford. They literally screwed up their own economy. Their government is not better, either; it owes trillions of dollars, with billions being owed to China. That is why it can`t dare preach `democracy` to China.

Ultimately, China will completely enslave the US.

And like WB can never see this fact.

Still, the US media has little regard for formal education. Instead of kids being taught to value formal education, honesty, hard work, and integrity, they are fed with Hollywood junk that glorifies promiscuity, violence, alcohol, and rebellion. I wasn't surprised to learn that Pheelyks role model/hero is Kim Kardashian.
michael890  4 | 130   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #2
is this another of pheelyk's free essays?
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #3
He's not that sharp.
BTW, does it make sense to have a role model who is a lot younger than you? Pheelyks role model(k.Kardashian) is about 32 while pheelyks is much, much older.
writers2beware  29 | 1712 ☆☆  
Jan 29, 2013 | #4
Evidence suggests that for very $1,000 spent in the US for essay services(essays, dissertations etc), about $700 ends up in the pockets of ESL players who are OUTSIDE of the US.

Where is this "evidence"? Oh, that's right you're referring to "fairy dust" evidence, as usual. My bad.
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #5
Let me school you:
There are over 2000 essay sites on the web. Out of these 2000 sites, about 70% are controlled by ESL merchants. Wondering how i got this figure? something small called sampling. Just take about 50 sites at random and 70% will be owned by ESL merchants. Assuming that orders to these sites are evenly distributed amongst the sites, ESl sites take about 70% of other orders, translating to 70% of revenues going to ESLs.
writers2beware  29 | 1712 ☆☆  
Jan 29, 2013 | #6
Traffic school, maybe, because I don't exactly pay attention . . . .

That's a load of crap. There are far more than 2,000 essay sites. In fact, I know of a single, American company that owns over 950 sites. So much for your "evidence."
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #7
That's a load of crap. There are far more than 2,000 essay sites. In fact, I know of a single, American company that owns over 950 sites. So much for your "evidence."

It seems simple logic isn't part of your reasoning. Even if there are 45,000 essay sites, well it does no harm to say there are over '2000'.

I wasn't interested in the actual number of sites, but the ownership distribution(Americans VS ESL). My ratio holds even if there are 30,000 sites.

Can you name that company?
michael890  4 | 130   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #8
My ratio holds even if there are 30,000 sites.

your metaphor doesn't hold though. the higher amount of esl owned sites could easily be attributed to lax international regulatory constraints.
writers2beware  29 | 1712 ☆☆  
Jan 29, 2013 | #9
the higher amount of esl owned sites could easily be attributed to lax international regulatory constraints.

And the ability to commit fraud with little to no repercussions.
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #10
You Americans claim you have freedom. However, just committing a minor felon(like failing to pay taxes) can land you to jail. American concepts of freedom, pursuit of 'happiness', and achievement of dreams are meant to hoodwink the public into believing government's creeds and thus ensure that the ruling elite will never be subjected to mutinies and coups.

By that, i am not endorsing any kind of illegal/immoral activity like operating fraudulent essay websites.

How many grave atrocities has the US committed throughout the world without any repercussions?
ELS writers should enjoy a chance to earn money through writing if they can be honest when dealing with their clients. No one has prevented you from e-selling whatever you want to sell to clients in Vietnam or Cambodia.
michael890  4 | 130   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #11
American concepts of freedom, pursuit of 'happiness', and achievement of dreams are meant to hoodwink the public into believing government's creeds and thus ensure that the ruling elite will never be subjected to mutinies and coups.

it took extensive detective work, but i was able to locate an advanced copy of the queen's upcoming book, soon to be published by a prestigious university press


  • queen's book
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #12
Michael890, if you don't stop your rudderless comments on my posts, you'll be lucky if you will ever get a single client from this site or any other forum. Already, i am fed up with your nonsense that is meant to increase your pm count, thus enabling you to spam students.
michael890  4 | 130   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #13
i could care less queen and your pseudo-intellectualism. go make threatening, hate speech somewhere else
pheelyks2  1 | 135   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #14
Pheelyks and their disciples are forever in an impotent war against ESL players in the essay industry

I have no disciples, nor am I at war with anyone. I think ES writers have a definite place in this industry, I just think they need to be honest with themselves and their customers about their capabilities.

evidence

You love using this word; if only you actually knew what it meant.

vidence suggests that for very $1,000 spent in the US for essay services(essays, dissertations etc), about $700 ends up in the pockets of ESL players who are OUTSIDE of the US.

What evidence? Where did you collect it?

I wasn't surprised to learn that Pheelyks role model/hero is Kim Kardashian.

I couldn't even pick Kim Kardashian out of a lineup, but I think she's an even bigger tramp than you are, queenie.

Really, where did you "learn" this stuff?

is this another of pheelyk's free essays?

My essays contain actual facts with citations/references that support the claims made. Queenie wouldn't know the first thing about writing something like that.

Pheelyks role model(k.Kardashian) is about 32 while pheelyks is much, much older.

I'm glad you know how old Kim Kardashian is--I certainly didn't. You need to hire different detectives for me, though--I'm not even 30.

My ratio holds even if there are 30,000 sites.

Where did you get your data?

ELS writers should enjoy a chance to earn money through writing if they can be honest when dealing with their clients

No one here has ever claimed otherwise.
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #15
i could care less queen and your pseudo-intellectualism. go make threatening, hate speech somewhere else

I am not into hate speech; i am against the nonsense that you type here.
Already, students are complaining about you and your fraudulent student services outfit.

i could care less queen and your pseudo-intellectualism. go make threatening, hate speech somewhere else

And you better stop sending pms to me.
michael890  4 | 130   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #16
I am not into hate speech; i am against the nonsense that you type here.

yes, sheba, some of your language is highly offensive, even to people that have no history of conflict with you. you've made me laugh on multiple occasions, but i would appreciate if you could tone down the rhetoric.

"hate speech
noun
speech that attacks a person or group on the basis of race, religion, gender, or sexual orientation."

Sheba:

"Eventually, the US will collapse under the weight of its own incompetence, lack of strong moral values, poor upbringing of kids, engaging in meaningless wars that costs billions of dollars, laziness and, importantly, outsourcing jobs that could be done by Americans."

"You are a hypocritical piece of an American lazy junk"

"Do not be mad at me- i am not the one who "Made you fat" Created you ugly.

"shi.thead, you may want to try pimping your mother for $1 a night."

"If i were you, i'd straightaway commit suicide. Trust me, you'd do the world a really big favour by reducing the number of idiots by 1. sh1thead"

"Still, the US media has little regard for formal education. Instead of kids being taught to value formal education, honesty, hard work, and integrity, they are fed with Hollywood junk that glorifies promiscuity, violence, alcohol, and rebellion."

"Another problem with Americans..."

And you better stop sending pms to me.

i sent you 1 PM complimenting some of your posts here
pheelyks2  1 | 135   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #17
i sent you 1 PM complimenting some of your posts here

Why would you offer her any encouragement? Literally NOTHING she says is based on any sort of objective examination or analysis--she simply makes s-i* up and gets all self-righteous defending it.
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #18
Remember one of your essay where you wrote a whole 700+ words without a single reference('evidence')
You're incompetent to talk about 'evidence'.
BTW, i will soon be hacking your email to expose your atrocious attitude towards your clients.
pheelyks2  1 | 135   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #19
Remember one of your essay where you wrote a whole 700+ words without a single reference

No, I don't. Care to point me to it?

BTW, i will soon be hacking your email to expose your atrocious attitude towards your clients.

That's illegal. I doubt your competence to make good on this threat, but on the off chance it actually happens I know where to point the authorities. I'm sure this forum and its owners will comply with law enforcement requests for your info, and then we'll have ourselves a real good time.
ProfessorVerb  35 | 829   ☆☆   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #20
Remember one of your essay where you wrote a whole 700+ words without a single reference('evidence')

In 1905, Albert Einstein published his argument, including his conclusion that E=MC2, in a three-page paper entitled "Does The Inertia Of A Body Depend On It's Energy Content?" The paper had no footnotes and not one single reference to support it.
ProfessorVerb  35 | 829   ☆☆   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #22
NOT A SINGLE REFERENCE.

I got lazy and just pasted what I found...
pheelyks2  1 | 135   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #23
No problem. NOT A SINGLE REFERENCE.

There are several references in both of the essays you just linked to. You ought to read more carefully.

Care to try again?

As long as i am offering help to students, i wouldn't care about the legality- or lack thereof- of my intrusion.

I'm sure law enforcement will feel the same way.
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #24
I'm sure law enforcement will feel the same way.

I routinely hack emails to access any information i may be in need of.
Should a time come when i will feel i need to retrieve some info from your emails, i will definitely hack your gmail. For example, one of these fine days, i want to know how much you earn as a writer. Clearly, i'd have to hack into your emails to obtain such information.

You better be hiding your email account behind your pillow.
pheelyks2  1 | 135   Freelance Writer
Jan 29, 2013 | #25
I routinely hack emails to access any information i may be in need of.

Aren't you a clever girl?

For example, one of these fine days, i want to know how much you earn as a writer.

Funny, you've already made several claims about how much I make and what my business is like. Are you now admitting that all of them were pure bulls-i*?

You better be hiding your email account behind your pillow.

The day you inspire the slightest bit of worry in me is the day I'll leave this industry entirely.
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 29, 2013 | #26
Funny, you've already made several claims about how much I make and what my business is like. Are you now admitting that all of them were pure bulls-i*?

Be slow with your dirty language. Already you have been warned afresh that you risk being banished again.
If i were you, i'd certainly play a silent, polite forum member. Remember, with all the tripe you type, it is not my business you are hurting(i have no any interests in academic writing). It is yours. Boy, and how i love students avoiding your services!

@Students: Can you really hire a dude like pheelyks that spends all his hours posting vitriolic posts instead of slaving for his clients?
Seriously, pheelyks, do you imagine the kind of image you cultivate in the minds of potential clients?
pheelyks2  1 | 135   Freelance Writer
Jan 30, 2013 | #27
Can you really hire a dude like pheelyks that spends all his hours

I've spent about an hour on this forum over the past several days. You have far more posts spread and a far greater time investment in the forum over the same period and over the long haul.

I know facts aren't your friends, but many of us here like them.

Seriously, pheelyks, do you imagine the kind of image you cultivate in the minds of potential clients?

I don't imagine anything. I just respond to the requests for help.
OP queen sheba  53 | 648 ☆☆   Observer
Jan 30, 2013 | #28
I know facts aren't your friends, but many of us here like them.

Today, i focused specifically on exposing your fraudulent modes of operations.
Once more, accept my offer and stop posting on this forum. I promise you'll get more clients if you are not in this forum.

That is my final offer to you.
pheelyks2  1 | 135   Freelance Writer
Jan 30, 2013 | #29
Today, i focused specifically on exposing your fraudulent modes of operations.

You mean, "today I made up more bulls-i* based on absolutely no evidence."

Once more, accept my offer and stop posting on this forum.

Hmmm......

No.

That is my final offer to you.

Oh. So now it's really on, I suppose. I'm shaking.
ProfessorVerb  35 | 829   ☆☆   Freelance Writer
Feb 11, 2013 | #30
committing a minor felon

We've been over this. There are no "minor" felonies.




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