Here is a problem student who sent me a conversation between her and a freelance writer. It's related to Turnitin and plagiarism. I tried to help her and I hope this experience can be taken as good advice for other students.STUDENT
Okay, here's the problem I have now. The first paper was already submitted into turnitin and is apparently in their data base forever. My second submission will of course be a match to the other paper. Before I submit, I was told to mention in the 'comments' section that my paper was previously submitted but then I cancelled that submission, so then the grader will know to check it against that first submission (am I makingsense). The problem now is that the highlighted parts that were copied and pasted in the original paper was only paraphrased in the second. It came from the same source (another student's paper) but paraphrased. We used her ideas and her sources. This could be a red flag for me. I was promised an original paper, not paraphrased from another source. Can you please help me?
And even though I cancelled my submission to the school, it already ran in turnitin so they do have a copy of the original paper (I called turnitin myself and confirmed this because I also purchased writercheck from them). I cannot have them remove it in their data base because it went through the school's portal. The parts highlighter in turnitin that I mentioned in my earlier email to you were copied from another student's paper (it matched 28-30% from utica college) i showed the person from support before the link expired. I know the sources are valid, however, if they compare the first paper to the second one (which they will do to confirm that they were both my submissions) they will see that the highlighted parts (copied parts) were only paraphrased. That will be a problem. I do see that the annotated bibliography (except for 2 articles I mentioned) were original. However these are the parts that were highlighted (I looked at turnitin link numerous times before it expired): The ENTIRE first and second paragraph (even though you corrected it, you left some parts in there that were word per word highlighted in turnitin) The second paragraph in Type of Research Study, The ENTIRE Problem Statement, 2 articles in the annotated bibliography (LOUD AND GARG), and Importance of Using a Theoretical Model-first paragraph I received a copy of a revised paper but again, the paraphrasing will be a red flag. The annotated bib sources are okay, except for those 2 articles. But you left the entire problem statement in there and parts of the revised version still has some of the highlighted parts in turnitin (e.g. . An overview of the condition is provided, including a discussion of its pathology and management. An article critique is provided, including a table examining the five areas of a research report. Imaging is then examined as it pertains to deep vein thrombosis. The application of this knowledge to the field of physical therapy is offered, followed by a conclusion highlighting the most important points of this paper.)
So here is my question, will you be able to provide me with an original paper, and not paraphrased with parts copied from another. At this point, the paper sounds good but it's a combination of original and copied-pasted parts. If I ran this again by writecheck, which is also owned by turnitin, will it pass? Please let me know now so I can consider other options. If your answer to my question is yes, I sent you 3 articles that can replace the 2 that I mentioned above. If you can touch base with me as soon as possible, I would really appreciate it.
FREELANCE WRITERLet's see here, so turnitin kept a copy on file of your first submission, even though you cancelled it. That was my work, so reworded or > not, the sources are valid, not someone elses ideas, not sure how that would work into this here.....seems like using different sources is the best way to go and referencing direct page numbers of those new sources....I can use different sources I think and it should be fine.
Unfortunately, I cannot get to this before tomorrow night/Tuesday morning, in order to do this right. Will that work for you?
PS. so i did run the revision through dustball plagiarism detector which gave it a "go", but is she having a valid point here that turnitin will raise redflags on it?
I did revise just about the whole intro part she is talking about, its not but a few pages, so no biggee to totally use different sources etc. But it sounds like it is going to be linked to the other paper via turnitin just because of the truly original part.