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kaitong   
Jun 07, 2014

UC Personal Statement Paper on my Father



"Dad." Finally, i call him father. It is the first time I have accepted him in four years.

UC statement about fatherSince i was born, I have never seem my biological father.Mother would not say anything about him.Whenever thought of my father's left, I was felt that I would never obtain the love from him.But the appearance of my stepfather have cleaned up all the doubt and worries that stucked in my heart.He is a man who deserves I respect.

When I graduated from junior high school,I came to America with my mother.My stepfather helped me to find the senior high school,settle down our life.But since then, there is very few time with stepfather gathered together.He seldom got home for dinner.At that time, I often lean on the windowsill and look out of window.I looked forward stepfather came back.However,until i sleep many time, he still not came back.

One late night,stepfather came home late.He dumped into sofa the moment after he stepped into house.I covered a quilt on him to prevent him from getting cold.Suddenly, I found out that there was some blood on his shirt, it made me distressed. After a closer look, I saw some scars on his hand.Tear were flowing down from my eyes.At that moment, I couldn't hold back sadness.My stepfather has been working had for family,I really felt it.He loves for me is selfless.I should be more concerned about stepfather in caring him.

I'm lucky because I have a selfless stepfather.He seem to become my biological father.I gradually truly felt he give me many sincere love. I will cherish the moment for study, get into a better university and never give up my dream.I want to use my life repay for parents in the future,especially is my stepfather.I know, the man who loves me most is my father in the world.
kaitong   
May 23, 2014

Dancing - Personal Statement Essay



Since I grew up, dance always been with me. It has became the best time of my memory. In this process, my partner was the most important person.He gave me te greatest help and support. Maybe, he has changed me.

Dancing Personal StatementThis is my first time to take part in the dance composition. I only thirteen years old at that time. In the background, I was very nervous worried. My heart beating fast. At that time,my partner kept comforting for me.

Many pair of players perform on stage. Finally,it's turn us. On the stage, we danced carefully,worried dancing will goes wrong. Unexpectable,when is coming to the end, probably because the heel of my shoes are too high, I can't stand firmly and very nervous. When i does a rotation movement, I fall on the ground. At that moment, I really felt very embarrassed because everybody are watched us.

When came back to the backstage, i started to cried because I knew our score will be low.I kept apologizing to the teachers and partner, Especially partner, i really felt sorry for him.We had worked hard to practice for six months because one of my mistakes can't enter the finals.Later, when announced the grades, we were eliminated because the scores penultimate.

After,I was determined to practice because I want to overcome this difficult. Each week after the class, when everyone leave, I stay in the dance room practice .Once i practice very late. When i go out the dance room, surprised to see my partner standing front of the door.I asked him why didn't went home. He said:"i practice for you afterward,let's make effort together!"At that moment,I was really moved deeply. I strongly desire, i can danced with him until forever.

Two years later, we participate the competition again, jointly completed a dance,won the third place. When i standed on the medals podium, except my parents and teachers, the person i want to think is my partner. Four four years, he gave me the greatest encouragement and support. He let me dance had the goal.His inclusion, his care, his patience and his pay,seems to dance became part of glorious and unforgettable part in my life. I most admire his kindness. Winners of the moment, he said hope we can donate the prize money to helped people needed. I was very affect.I think i can dance with him,it is my lucky.Maybe it is fate.I learned many things except to dance about the life. Dance is very significant for a period of time.It seems like turning point of my life.Because he impacted and influenced to me many.

Last week ,we chat on the video.When I knew he was admitted to a good dance school,and find a new partner,too.I was really happy for him.He said he looking forward to meet and dance with me in the future.I told him there will be have opportunities.

For me,dance is not only use body language to tell a story,but also an expression in live, even is the melody of life.Now,I often remembered of my dance time.I really hope i can find a dance partner in here.In my heart, single dance is better, but also not as warm as duet dance.