Hi all,

Firstly, I am not a native English speaker. For same I ordered to edubirdie.com for a task. I'm also from Russia. They delivered the work but I need this helpful forum reviews on the work they deliver.

I am pasting some 2 paras from their work for reviews. If it is all okay, I will submit it further, if there is issues in it, please tell me so I can get proof-reading of it.

Analysis of the profiles of offenders, includes discussion of several key components. In particular, offender profile is analysed below by age, gender, race and ethnicity, and by time between the incident and the time of arrest.

Analysis of offenders by age includes several key points. Out of the 9,778 arrestees between the years 2004 and 2009 arrested in parking lots in the state of Colorado, ages range from 9 years old to 78 years old. The most common demographic was the age range of 18 to 24, consisting of 36.66 percent of all arrestees. The average age of all suspects arrested or cited in all cities was 26.46 years old and the median age of these suspects was 23 years old. Detailed data is available in the graph provided below.

I will appreciate comments on it. Also if you guys recommend me any proof-reading service if there is issues in above work.