Like most of you guys working in the "student assignment helping" field, I want to earn extra income out of my pen. Please i need assistance and suggestions to guide me on the road toward writing career.

I have been working as a writer for the past two years. I have a degree in computer science from a mediocre university in Pakistan. I write papers on business studies, political science, history, social issues, etc. My long term desire is to acquire employment in American and UK based essay writing websites. However my question is how do I obtain employment, how do I assess my writing skills, and possibly upgrade them to the level of native writers? Here is a sample of my writing:
"The process of change inside my organization has been exceptional and excellent. The results have been fantastic since an industrious environment has been generated. Employees have also been sent on orientation and induction programs in order to boost and augment their skills. Management now has a monitoring and validating system which provides them with real time information about the work process. A systematic and organized change management program was deployed. Management sought to implement the system for a single department.
Using this pilot project, the strengths and weaknesses of the approach were identified and recognized"Update: Thank you for providing me with a balanced and honest evaluation of my skills. I would never pose as a EFL writer. Unfortunately every Pakistani company scams overseas clients by claiming to have EFL writers on their payroll. Another question is that I scored 100/120 in TOEFL. Say I obtain assignments from an EFL audience, would that count as a positive sign? Finally do companies like ET hire ESL writers?