Michelle112233
Yes Mr. Halasz wrote a paper over half a year ago and over four months of that time while I was trying to contact him concerning revisions my email was ignored due an email problem on his part.
He made no revisions to the first paper and chose to rewrite it on his own.
I listed Mr. Halasz's other websites because I have seen nothing in his behaviour that would suggests different behaviour simply because it was contracted though a different company.
Yes, I hired him to write a paper he agreed and did not produce the paper he said he would thus I consider him untrustworthy. THe incompetence comes from his writing ability.
Had I received the paper and submitted it for publication under my name alone then that would make me untrustworthy and unethical.
That you hired Mr. Halasz to write your screen play is your choice and is not my concern. I can only hope that it is a better experience than what I have had.
Since I last posted to this thread (post #27, 28) at Mr. Halasz's insistance(1), the only revisions he has made was to put the references into MLA format.
The revisions I asked for were to provide supporting evidence to the ideas that he mentioned in the paper.
Mr. Halasz agreed to do so and mentioned several times that he was working on the revisions I asked for.
However, after several weeks Mr. Halasz said that making such revisions will require writing an additional four pages, which he will not do for free. He asked me to pay his going rate of 25$ a page in advance if I want to see the revisions. (2)
This is despite his originally telling me that he would make the revisions for free and advertising that he will revise until satisfied. (3)
(1) Mr. Halasz insisted that I post to this site stating he was making revisions otherwise he would not do any further work on the paper I asked for.
From: John Halasz --
Date: 2012/8/15, Wed 20:04
Subject: Re: ESL Journal Rough Draft
I need you to update the site to reflect that I am revising again and have already rewritten the paper from scratch. Once that is done, I will make the additional references.
and
----- Original Message -----
From: John Halasz --
Date: 2012/8/15, Wed 13:57
Subject: Re: ESL Journal Rough Draft
Ok. Please update the post with that information.
(2) I indicated the areas that I felt needed support and many minnor changes such as word order and use of prepositions using Track Changes in word. The majority of the ideas put forth by Mr. Halasz has some merit to the topic but had no support.
----- Original Message -----
From: John Halasz -- Writer for Hire
Date: 2012/9/12, Wed 10:28
Subject: Re: ESL Journal Rough Draft
I have been working on the paper more. If I am to add additional supporting information to every paragraph, this paper is going to end up being 5 pages longer than it is currently. I cannot and will not add an additional 5 pages for free, especially after rewriting completely for no additional charge. For now, I will convert the references to MLA. If you want to proceed with the additions, however, you will need to pay for them. My current rate is $25 per page. I will have the MLA within 3 days.
----- Original Message -----
From: John Halasz -- Writer for Hire
Date: 2012/9/18, Tue 01:23
Subject: Re: mla
I will make the 4 pages of additions when you pay for them. You can send payment via paypal to 100writers@gmail I am absolutely not writing 4 pages for free and am not entertaining the idea at all.
(3)
From: John Halasz
Date: 2011/12/15, Thu 00:20
Subject: ESL Journal
Yes, we will get it published. It for some reason it is not accepted the first time, I will edit it for free so you can resubmit.
And on Ebay Mr. Halasz* advertises:
Return policy
I will revise until you are satisfied!
*Please note that since this thread has started Mr. Halasz has changed his ebay profile from his name to examplepapers.
I have asked Mr. Halasz if he ever intends to fix the paper or not and am now waiting for his reply.
Thank you for reading.
Sincerely,
Con
