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placed order with lawteacher and received some crap


jadenb  2 | 8   Student
Jan 16, 2014 | #1
I made orders with lawteacher because I was so desperate to get a very good essay. It can also show the approach to write a good essay and give me some inspiration on how to answer problems in exam when I can't ask anyone to help me.

However, what I have received is some crap. I didn't read the essay word-by-word. I just skimmed the essay after receiving it cos I think it is not opposed to require much amendment. I did ask the writer to amend for a few times to include more cases and journals. Sigh. It's really my fault. The first essay I received did not have the case name italised. I should have been suspicious about it. It is not literally written by a writer holding a law degree. Even a first-year law student knows about this.

Law ProfessorSince I was preparing for my exam, I didn't spend much time on reading the essay thoroughly. But when I found out this website, I was a bit worried. So I spent 60 quid to mark the essay to see if the essay does achieve a 2.1. I literally submitted the essay written by the writer for marking without any amendment by myself. Thanks to my marker, it was a 3rd. I think if the marker was the same as the writer, the mark provided by the marking service would be over 60 %. Then, I would be completely finished. If I submitted this piece of coursework, I would receive a fail for sure. In the marking script provided by law teacher, the "marker" said the English standard is poor, but didn't say anything about the fault or merit in addressing the law concept. It's like the essay was marked by an ordinary British to check the grammar. It has nothing to do with checking the law concept.

Fortunately, I received the result of marking quite early. That's why I had a few days left to virtually rewrite my essay after spotting a number of fatal errors. The writer did include a lot of cases and journal articles. But they are not relevant to the context of essay. Worse still, some cases have been wrongly used. I didn't spot the problem earlier because I was a little bit happy about receiving an essay which contains more than 40 footnotes, which I never do in the past.

But thanks to the marking service, I spotted the problem and rewrote the essay when it's not too late. I've submitted the essay. Hopefully, the essay will end up nicely.

This XXking page really tricks me. How can the company receive so much media coverage when they can't even produce a normal essay ?

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The following link is from Guardian(authoritative newspaper) about why you should seriously think of writing your essay yourself.

theguardian.com/education/mortarboard/2012/feb/06/essay-writing-for-students

I hope that what I've paid is enough to buy them a coffin. I really hope my essays will be much better than before as I rewrote them again. May god bless me.

Even if they say the essay is used for reference only because you can't hand in the work as your own, it is the worst reference ever. I won't give a penny because it'll ruin your degree.

If you just skim the essay, you won't find any problem. Only if you read the essay word-by-word, you'll spot loads of problem. Wrong cases used, leading cases missing, irrelevant concept, missing legislation...

I 'll pay at least 50 quid if the above things are all included.

If the essay is treated as a collection of cases, there's no need to buy essays from these companies unless you didn't attend any lectures and seminars.

Even if you are as "clever" as this, you should be able to grasp the central idea from reading some lecture notes unless you don't bother to do so.

The essay they produce lacks critical analysis, which is the key to a 2.1.

I didn't study every day, but I only spent three hours to understand the whole picture of the essay.

This is simply the worst experience I've had ever. I really don't know what I should do to make up for the loss of money. Perhaps only a decent mark for the coursework can help.
Major  35 | 1449 ☆☆  
Jan 16, 2014 | #2
thanks to the marking service, I spotted the problem and rewrote the essay

The most important thing is that you actually rewrote it because it's illegal to submit model essay for a grade (it's also illegal in most countries to guarantee any grade).

Btw. things like lack of italization etc. don't make a bad essay. And you should consult more than one "marker" to give you a true idea about the quality of the essay.
OP jadenb  2 | 8   Student
Jan 16, 2014 | #3
not making a bad essay by not italicizing case name? This is the best joke I've heard ever. Are you studying law?

Consulting one more writer? I'll rather spend those money in some high-class restaurants.

Now, I understand why it is legal to have this kind of service. Because they'll never produce a decent essay which can help you get high grade.

Even if the essay is meant to be for reference only, the grade should be at least a low 2.2, which becomes a 2.1 after amendment.

It makes no sense to pay so much to receive an essay which is a 3rd or even a fail. You can have done it yourself.

Students who just submit the work with little amendment or no amendment will just receive a fail or a 3rd. That's why the university won't suspect those students of the possibility of cheating. Normally, only those students who get over 65% will be suspected.

I guess a lot of students do not allow plenty of time for the work to be completed. They may place the order only when it is quite late, say 3 days before the submission deadline. So the essay-writing company can always get away with low-quality essays and the students will suffer.

I don't think customers can successfully ask for a refund if the mark does not meet their expectation because the company can simply say "you are not meant to submit it without any amendment" or "the essay is used as reference only", in fact, very poor reference.

Even if you allow 7 days for the essay to be completed, it makes no difference. Because I did request a number of amendments before using their marking service . And the result is still devastating !

I think students should feel happy that they are not kicked out by their university even if they cannot get a 2.1 because the essay may be filled by plagiarism. Why don't the company use Turnitin instead? It's the software which a lot of universities use to check for plagiarism.

If Viper is good, then why don't the universities use Viper instead? After all, Viper is free of charge.
FreelanceWriter  6 | 3089   ☆☆☆   Freelance Writer
Jan 16, 2014 | #4
They may place the order only when it is quite late, say 3 days before the submission deadline.

It's funny how definitions (like "quite late") depend on perspective (i.e. student versus professional writer). I routinely get projects requested for next-morning delivery, and sometimes, even for requested delivery in a couple of hours. In fact, I specialize in (or at least greatly prefer) rush orders, precisely because the price is obviously higher than non-rush orders and it means much less writing for the money. Usually, when I get an inquiry without a specified deadline for anything about 10 pages or less and I have to ask "when is it due?" I'm usually hoping the response is "tomorrow" and not "next week."
OP jadenb  2 | 8   Student
Jan 16, 2014 | #5
Do you know that your post reveals that you're a greedy person who always hopes for rush order so that you can earn loads of money?

And this also makes me think that no matter how early I place an order, the writer is very likely to write the essay at the very last moment.
FreelanceWriter  6 | 3089   ☆☆☆   Freelance Writer
Jan 16, 2014 | #6
I'm not even arguing with you (let alone insulting you or calling you names); just responding to the topic of conversation.

Do you know that your post reveals that you're a greedy person who always hopes for rush order so that you can earn loads of money?

I wouldn't call it "loads of money" and it's not "greedy" when sellers of retail goods hopes that customers will buy more expensive items rather than less expensive items or when a time-dependent service provider hopes that customers will place rush orders. It's up to the customer when to order, not me; and whatever the price, it's quoted in advance and always up to the customer to accept or decline and continue looking for a better price from someone else.

No offense intended, but as long as the end-product you receive meets your expectations, it's really none of your business when it's produced. Frankly, most orders get placed on a calendar and they get written whenever it's most convenient for me before your deadline. If it's a very long, difficult order, work obviously begins much sooner than it does for shorter, much easier orders. If you order what I consider to be an easy or very routine project and our agreed-upon deadline is Midnight Saturday (let's say), I will probably write it sometime on Saturday, although not "at the very last moment." That's also "revealed" in the many previous posts on related topics where I've explained that very explicitly before. Congratulations, Sherlock: you figured me out.
OP jadenb  2 | 8   Student
Jan 16, 2014 | #7
Thank you for being so honest to me.
Major  35 | 1449 ☆☆  
Jan 16, 2014 | #8
Students who just submit the work with little amendment or no amendment will just receive a fail or a 3rd.

No, they will receive an expulsion notice.
OP jadenb  2 | 8   Student
Jan 17, 2014 | #9
This also explains why the essay-writing companies can always get away with giving low-quality essays because what they produce is too "good" to be suspected by the university of the possibility of cheating.

I think the link from the Guardian should be enough to make potential customers write their essays themselves without seeking help from anyone.

Some people may still go on to place the order even if they know about this forum because they are unsure about the reliability of the comments of this forum. They may just think it is just a way of marketing strategy to scare potential customers away by slandering other competitors.

If you still place the order after reading the passage from the Guardian, which is in #1, I can only say you're so desperate of trying your luck.

You may stand a better chance of winning some money by buying Lotto or gambling in casinos. At least it is not absolutely 100% of losing all your money.




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