If you buy a custom essay and you re-write it all..

like in different words and in your own writing style but in the same order and the quotes in the same order, when the essay is scanned through turnitin, will it come up as plagirised. Including the bibliography?

It depends how well you rewrite it :d More rewrites, less chances it will be caught.

The more re-writes? how do you mean?...ok basically if i basically change the writing style so different so if a person reading my peice and that peeice would say its similar, but different because it answers the same question. How about the structure? Like for example, footnotes will all be in the same order, will this be pointed out in turnitin?

i paid 1200 pounds for 2 essays !!! bleemin heck i was really desperate eh. but what now, im stuck ... i got to re-write it all and plus i didnt even consider the point of footnotes. If the footnotes are in the same order and its ran through a plagriasm site, im doomed !

If you use different words thats the most important for turnitin, you are fine :)

An honest company won't have given you something that has been turned in already without telling you. You shouldn't have any problem rewriting it.

You got that right - honest website will do everything to cover you up so your cheating is successful ;-).

Dishonest, ripoff sites simply lie, cheat, and steal both their writers and customers.

Do you mean, "You got that right. Honest websites will do everything to cover it up so your cheating is successful ;-)". Dear God, man, you run a writing website?

And no, this is a stupid argument. If I want to provide someone a sample paper, I want it to be attuned to their exact needs and requirements. Let's say they're ESL. I want to construct a sample paper that shows them how they could respond to the prompt within their language skills.

In any respect, this is moot. There is an implicit, often explicit, assumption that the material is created fresh from the student. This is why in the industry there is a DIFFERENCE between purchasing pre-used papers and purchasing new ones.

There is no difference. The only difference is in the language usage presentation because all the research and information is already there. What a custom essay writer does is to write in his own words what is already known and was described/research by someone else in past. Custom essay writer does not invent anything new. They only use their language skill to present it as something new. They just rewrite things. Everything else is old.

But there are good and bad firms, good firms are better at rewriting.

No, there IS a difference. A student who takes the custom paper as a model has no risk of plagiarism. A student who doesn't could be.

By your reasoning, there's no difference between JK Rowling writing Harry Potter and me quoting it verbatim and selling it. After all, she didn't make up anything NEW, right? Custom essay writers who are GOOD will try to approach a topic with a new light, blending past research and their own unique philosophy to argue something new. You reveal your poor writing in one swoop: Your PHILOSOPHY is misleading.

You assume your client wants to use essay as his own. I do not assume that and dont want that.

Actually, no, I don't, as I explained with reasoning that you don't answer because you're perpetually incapable of actually making coherent claims.

Isn't it possible to check that in practice on beforehand? And if your institute cant provide you with a key then you might make use of one of the several free services online ;)

Can you possibly rephrase what you said above?

Make sure you try and vary the length of the paragraphs

please give me a trusted site

@sophia911, when you get the model paper and you decide to rewrite it in order to avoid any possible instance of plagiarism, there are number of things that you have to consider and accomplish.

You have to consider whether or not you have enough vocabulary and writing skills to actually alter the model paper to the point where what the writer originally wrote is still retained in the revised writing. If you cannot maintain the essence of the paper, then it is a bad idea to rewrite the paper. You also have to consider the in-text citation placements and how you can change the placement of those references in the essay in a manner that still flows fluidly in the manner of the original.

There are just too many factors that need to be considered in a personal revision of the custom paper or dissertation that I don't think it is worth the bother for you to even try. Look, you paid for a custom paper, therefore you can rest assured that everything about the paper will pass as original content. That is, unless you submitted it beforehand to a site such as turnitin and then your professor or teacher will submit the same paper for plagiarism scanning at the same site.

Since the essay will already be in the system, then it will most likely turn up as plagiarized. If that is not the case, then I would not try to alter the work of the writer anymore. It is not worth the risk on your part. The paper is ready for grading and will most likely get an acceptable grade already.

Just relax and take whatever grade you get for the paper.

"If you buy a custom essay and you re-write it all.."

I can count the number of times clients have actually done this over the past 20 years on one hand. Disclaimers aside, people need what they need when they need it. Who cares? Not me ...

I do not believe that an essay will come up as plagiarized in turnitin if the student has changed the wording of the paper in totality. Using the same quotes and bibliography does not make for a plagiarized paper. It just means students used similar sources and were attracted by similar quotes. If you want to avoid any instance of plagiarism though, it would be better if you just paraphrase your in-text citations / quotations. That will also help your essay come across as better researched and written. Not only that, but the professor will appreciate your taking the time to analyze and explain the information you found. In other words, using the model paper exactly as such, a sample by which you can complete your own version of the paper, can only be helpful to your grade and will help you avoid any instance or accusation of academic dishonesty.

If you completely rewrite it in different words, it won't get flagged by any anti-plagiarism scanner unless you use all of the same references and citations; in that case, only the reference list and the citations will get flagged. It's not at all unusual for a totally original paper to get some flags for the references and citations, simply because most of the sources you'll find for any project have also been found and used by others many times in similar projects. That's why you should always delete all the citations and the reference page before scanning your essay to get an accurate scan; then scan the whole reference page separately. The reason for also scanning the reference page is that isolated flags for individual sources listed is perfectly normal, but an entire alphabetized list of sources that gets flagged indicates that all of those sources were used by someone else for a similar project. This is especially important if the citation style requires page numbers in citations, because it's an obvious sign of plagiarism when all of the citations get flagged and all of them appear in the same order in the essay and cite the exact same pages of every source as another essay, even if all of the narrative writing is original and un-flagged.

If the question is only about plagiarism scanning (vs. what constitutes "plagiarism" as far as professors and academic institutions are concerned), then rewriting the entire essay will make it "safe" to use, even if the same essay has been submitted previously by someone else. I get orders requesting that sometimes: clients send me an entire A+ essay or thesis and ask me to "make it original" by completely rewriting it but without changing any of the content. However, if you're asking whether that constitutes plagiarism, the answer is yes, even if you change every single word of the original essay. That's because you're supposed to cite any idea that comes from someone else, even if you write it in your own words. If paraphrasing a legitimate source without attribution is plagiarism, then (obviously) paraphrasing an entire essay's worth of someone else's ideas is also plagiarism if you don't cite the actual author of those ideas.

The TurnItIn report has an option to temporarily exclude quotes and bibliographies/reference lists from the originality score. I've been told by a tutor that bibliographies which are unique and don't flag as plagiarised are suspicious and queried for authenticity due to the implausible nature of referencing multiple unique journals. I've never considered an entire bibliography could be picked up as plagiarised by TurnItIn if in the exact same order as a previous piece of work submitted, so I tried it out in the test area, and you're right, it came back as 100% plagiarised, meaning that a complete rewrite would have to utilize some new references.

Turn-it-in shows how similar is a paper with the text in their repository by assigning different colors to the level of similarity it finds. Put another way, it is a similarity index generator. The threshold of whether a paper is plagiarized is decided by the university. For instance, a university may deem it plagiarism if a paper has similarity index exceeding their accepted limit of 5% or 10% (which are usually the standard yardstick).

That said, I have helped some clients completely rewrite their papers. I have done so with three scenarios: by keeping (1) all the references the same, (2) changing some of them, and (3) changing all of them.

In all of these three scenarios/cases, I have never had a revision/warning for plagiarism. Recently, I assisted a student whose university uses two different similarity scanners (and she highlighted it to me). After a little discussion, we agreed to keep ALL of the references the same, the same order, exact same. Nothing. The paper passed.

I am not saying that your experiences are not valid. I am just trying to share my experience in this area. Thank you.

Completely rewriting the paper and making sure to exclude quotes and references when running through Turnitin will yield positive results. However, the chance that your Turnitin report will be 100% original is rare. The program is notorious for flagging even the smallest similarities, many of which are commonly used phrases. That is why universities typically allow a 5-10% similarity score without penalty.

Short answer: rewrite, exclude quotes/references. You should be fine.

A complete rewrite means you have changed the presentation of the paper by 100%. That means the paper has become an original. You should not worry about plagiarism possibilities because your rewrite has negated that possibility. However, my worry would be more about how well you paraphrased the content of the paper. Some students who paraphrase the model papers end up mangling the presentation in a manner that makes the original passing grade paper a failing score presentation. Then the student comes around and blames the writer, demanding a refund. Students needs to know when to leave well enough alone. Do not rewrite an original model paper if there is no need to do so. Specially if you are not doing well in that particular class. Take the help that you paid for. It will be worth it.