It's AMAZING how everyone is going crazy about Kenyan writers. A "classic" case of idle Americans

Why don't students just cut the chase and do their own assignments. It's the highest form of academic ethics.

Indeed but WB you realize that you are more of a prick than prix is?

You should unless you don't have a brain....

I think you are an id{i}ot, they should do their own papers.

Perfect evidence of American Mongoloid idiocy, how do you find time between junk food and video games, isn't your schedule full as well?

Wow! ignorant idiot, you make it worse for yourself each time you try to say something.

But he has previously thus confirming our suspicions that he is a retard, isn't it leer?

Of course you wouldn't, I'm not surprised.

You write English well enough for general purposes (and maybe for ESL clients) but definitely not well enough to represent yourself as a professional writer to anybody expecting native speaker-quality English writing. I don't know that it's something you can necessarily improve on.

There's nothing terribly wrong in your writing but your sentence structure, vocabulary, and punctuation are definitely obviously ESL. Considering what you posted is likely something you've been very careful to make sure represents your best work, you should never fail to disclose that you're an ESL writer. It's pretty good for an ESL; it cannot possibly compete with qualified native-langauage writing on any level.

Basically, what you posted would be the starting point for a competent ESL author who still needs a native speaker to improve on his writing for presentation to a native audience.

No problem. TOEFL can't determine whether your writing "sounds" authentic to a native speaker's ear. I don't think ET has a firm rule about it; they probably go strictly by your writing samples and the quality of your work. You probably write as well as or better than many native English speakers who aren't professional writers, but if a company's customers are primarily American, they're probably not going to hire any writers who don't sound the way we do in writing. Don't take it personally; it happens to us when we offer our services to UK companies who only want UK-educated writers regardles of how good our grammar is or how extensive our US educational credentials are.