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AJ87   
Apr 27, 2011

I really can't be bothered arguing anymore. I've made my points and it's clear that I have been robbed!

If anyone is reading this post and considering placing an order with Writer Help Me, send me a PM and I will show you their "Masters" quality work so you can make up your own mind.

If you want a quality essay - STAY AWAY from Writer Help Me.
AJ87   
Apr 27, 2011

Your expert will critique your work for you to boost your grade, as well as making suggestions for further improvements.

This was necessary for the writer so they could make further improvements and boost their high school essay up to a Masters standard, which it should have been in the first place.
AJ87   
Apr 27, 2011

Both scenarios DO NOT give "reason to believe" that a customer is intending to cheat.

Scenario 1) Hand essay into my professor for feedback and ask for a rewrite - fully understand that this is illegal and going against copyright.

Scenario 2) Provide this essay to a feedback service and submit these changes that will form the basis of a rewrite - In my opinion this is NOT illegal and does NOT mean I am using this service to hand the essay in for my own merit.

If I made changes to the essay and provided feedback to the writer, this would be fully legitimate right? So why can't I get somebody to do this on my behalf who has years of experience at this?
AJ87   
Apr 27, 2011

What law?

Writer Help Me thought that I handed this into to my professor and after I explained the situation they still think I handed it into my professor.

If I was to hand this in to my professor and provided this feedback to the writer, I would totally understand Writer Help Me declining to do a rewrite. BUT this is not the case.
AJ87   
Apr 27, 2011

After receiving a high school essay that was supposed to be at Masters level, I did not believe the writer was capable of doing a proper rewrite on their own. This is another reason why I put it through to a feedback site, to uncover every single mistake so the writer would have no excuse for screwing up a second time.

Everyone keeps going on about a "grading service" to boost grades, I see it as a feedback service to make it easier for the writer to make changes and uncover all the mistakes, without this I doubt the writer would have done a better job second time round.

You do not understand how poor this essay was, it was shocking.

I do deserve a refund because the service I paid for was delivered to me late, was abysmal and numerous guarantees on the Writer Help Me site were broken.
AJ87   
Apr 27, 2011

I had no choice but to submit this essay through a feedback service because it was so poor. I was not going to waste hours of my time going through the essay line by line picking out all the mistakes, all because a writer did not do their job properly. If this was a good essay first time round, I would not have had to put this through the feedback service.

I can appreciate that all work cannot be completed to the required standard first time round by all writers, however the rewrite should have been completed and it was the writers fault that I had to resort to the feedback service.

When you require a service you go to a professional.

Simple asking the opinion of a professional, does not mean I am going to commit "academic fraud".

Just like every person with a knife is not a murderer.
AJ87   
Apr 27, 2011

The reason they spent so long going over this essay was because it was so poor and littered with hundreds of mistakes. The person who was going through the essay provided a background of their education history and offered to provide tangible proof of their qualifications. I believe it was a very thorough feedback service, far superior than the actual essay from Writer Help Me.

Does anyone know how I can get a refund from Writer Help Me?
AJ87   
Apr 27, 2011

WritersBeware - I admit that I should have notified Writer Help Me about the feedback service prior to sending the documents through, this is the first essay service I have used so do not know the ins and outs, however I notified them as soon as this concerned was raised. Writer Help Me still believe this essay was sent to my professor. I did not submit this to a feedback service to hand the improved draft in directly, I did this because time was against me and after a quick scan over the work I knew it was drivel (therefore needing a thorough check).

If you think that a professor spent four hours providing this assessment for anything less than a couple hundred bucks, then you are deluded.

Cost me £45, not a couple hundred dollars.

Writer Help Me - I have explained the situation to you numerous times. The essay was late, it did not meet the brief, it was not at the level I requested and you refused a rewrite AFTER I explained the situation to you and proved this was NOT handed into my professor.

P.S. Still waiting for my refund.

AJ.
AJ87   
Apr 26, 2011

Writer Help Me - If you read my emails to support, got my feedback word doc and read my original post carefully, it is clear that I did NOT hand this in to my professor. I have no intention of committing academic fraud. I used a marking and critiquing service online which checked the essay for me. I would have checked this myself, however was limited by time constraints.

The feedback word doc was titled "Scan My Essay: Gold Service".

The following statements within the feedback doc also support this:

"I have estimated that the remedial work needed to improve this essay will take at least ten more hours, which may seem daunting. Perhaps it will put this estimate into perspective when I advise that this Gold Assessment has taken me approximately four hours."

If you think that a "professor" would title such a document as "Gold Service" then you are deluded.

AJ.
AJ87   
Apr 25, 2011

The positive reviews regarding Writer Help Me were enough to persuade me to part with my cash...BIG MISTAKE!

I recently submitted a "custom research" order to the Writer Help Me site for a Masters level essay for $210. The writer assigned to my order was WHM5085.

1) The essay was submitted to me AFTER the deadline. "We guarantee to always adhere to custom research paper deadlines". LIE!

2) The essay quality was clearly not at master's level and would not even qualify at undergraduate level. "We assign master- and doctoral-level orders ONLY to our writers who possess a corresponding master- or doctoral-level degree in the particular field of study or coursework". LIE! More like a Mickey Mouse master's qualification!

3) The brief was not adhered to and the essay clearly did not meet the assignment objective.

4) I have been declined a rewrite of my paper and fobbed off by support stating "The writer completed a solid order and these modifications would be your responsibility". Whilst the Writer Help Me site states "For our custom research paper service, we will provide free, unlimited revisions or editing in the unlikely event that we do not adhere to your original research and writing specifications". LIE!

5) My messages to support are now being ignored and I have been declined a refund! SCAM!

Writer Help MeBelow is the feedback I received for this essay from a marking and critiquing service (marked at undergraduate level):

This essay would be a borderline fail, with a mark of approximately 39-41%. This is primarily because of a poor standard of written English and inadequate, or incorrect, referencing.

The treatment you have given each question is shallow, simplistic and without extensive analysis. There is a woeful lack of referencing and your writing style is riddled with annoying quirks, repetition and ungrammatical phrasing.

All statements, assertions, and opinions must be founded upon sound academic reference. This is a major omission in your work.

You clearly have a fondness for the colon. Curb it, and instead learn where a colon should be used appropriately. Verbs tenses must agree.

Sentence structure is important and you seem to have some considerable difficulty in this area. All sentences must contain an active verb; your habit of starting a sentence fragment with 'As, ...' is not acceptable.

It is not acceptable to write a paragraph of unsubstantiated assertions, only to place a reference at the end, with a page range. Each statement must be referenced. Page numbers need only to be used when referencing a direct quote.

Do not use hackneyed phrases, however, to introduce components such as conclusions - your signature phrase 'when you step back and analyze...' must never appear in your writing again.

The language used in the essay is very basic and sometimes veers into colloquialisms and casual phrasing. Academic writing is formal writing and requires a higher standard of grammar and vocabulary than secondary level writing: you must make significant improvements in both.

Do not waste your time and money with this company! You will be robbed!!!
AJ.