AJ87 1 | 9
Apr 25, 2011 | #1
The positive reviews regarding Writer Help Me were enough to persuade me to part with my cash...BIG MISTAKE!
I recently submitted a "custom research" order to the Writer Help Me site for a Masters level essay for $210. The writer assigned to my order was WHM5085.
1) The essay was submitted to me AFTER the deadline. "We guarantee to always adhere to custom research paper deadlines". LIE!
2) The essay quality was clearly not at master's level and would not even qualify at undergraduate level. "We assign master- and doctoral-level orders ONLY to our writers who possess a corresponding master- or doctoral-level degree in the particular field of study or coursework". LIE! More like a Mickey Mouse master's qualification!
3) The brief was not adhered to and the essay clearly did not meet the assignment objective.
4) I have been declined a rewrite of my paper and fobbed off by support stating "The writer completed a solid order and these modifications would be your responsibility". Whilst the Writer Help Me site states "For our custom research paper service, we will provide free, unlimited revisions or editing in the unlikely event that we do not adhere to your original research and writing specifications". LIE!
5) My messages to support are now being ignored and I have been declined a refund! SCAM!
Below is the feedback I received for this essay from a marking and critiquing service (marked at undergraduate level):
This essay would be a borderline fail, with a mark of approximately 39-41%. This is primarily because of a poor standard of written English and inadequate, or incorrect, referencing.
The treatment you have given each question is shallow, simplistic and without extensive analysis. There is a woeful lack of referencing and your writing style is riddled with annoying quirks, repetition and ungrammatical phrasing.
All statements, assertions, and opinions must be founded upon sound academic reference. This is a major omission in your work.
You clearly have a fondness for the colon. Curb it, and instead learn where a colon should be used appropriately. Verbs tenses must agree.
Sentence structure is important and you seem to have some considerable difficulty in this area. All sentences must contain an active verb; your habit of starting a sentence fragment with 'As, ...' is not acceptable.
It is not acceptable to write a paragraph of unsubstantiated assertions, only to place a reference at the end, with a page range. Each statement must be referenced. Page numbers need only to be used when referencing a direct quote.
Do not use hackneyed phrases, however, to introduce components such as conclusions - your signature phrase 'when you step back and analyze...' must never appear in your writing again.
The language used in the essay is very basic and sometimes veers into colloquialisms and casual phrasing. Academic writing is formal writing and requires a higher standard of grammar and vocabulary than secondary level writing: you must make significant improvements in both.
Do not waste your time and money with this company! You will be robbed!!!
AJ.
I recently submitted a "custom research" order to the Writer Help Me site for a Masters level essay for $210. The writer assigned to my order was WHM5085.
1) The essay was submitted to me AFTER the deadline. "We guarantee to always adhere to custom research paper deadlines". LIE!
2) The essay quality was clearly not at master's level and would not even qualify at undergraduate level. "We assign master- and doctoral-level orders ONLY to our writers who possess a corresponding master- or doctoral-level degree in the particular field of study or coursework". LIE! More like a Mickey Mouse master's qualification!
3) The brief was not adhered to and the essay clearly did not meet the assignment objective.
4) I have been declined a rewrite of my paper and fobbed off by support stating "The writer completed a solid order and these modifications would be your responsibility". Whilst the Writer Help Me site states "For our custom research paper service, we will provide free, unlimited revisions or editing in the unlikely event that we do not adhere to your original research and writing specifications". LIE!
5) My messages to support are now being ignored and I have been declined a refund! SCAM!
Below is the feedback I received for this essay from a marking and critiquing service (marked at undergraduate level):This essay would be a borderline fail, with a mark of approximately 39-41%. This is primarily because of a poor standard of written English and inadequate, or incorrect, referencing.
The treatment you have given each question is shallow, simplistic and without extensive analysis. There is a woeful lack of referencing and your writing style is riddled with annoying quirks, repetition and ungrammatical phrasing.
All statements, assertions, and opinions must be founded upon sound academic reference. This is a major omission in your work.
You clearly have a fondness for the colon. Curb it, and instead learn where a colon should be used appropriately. Verbs tenses must agree.
Sentence structure is important and you seem to have some considerable difficulty in this area. All sentences must contain an active verb; your habit of starting a sentence fragment with 'As, ...' is not acceptable.
It is not acceptable to write a paragraph of unsubstantiated assertions, only to place a reference at the end, with a page range. Each statement must be referenced. Page numbers need only to be used when referencing a direct quote.
Do not use hackneyed phrases, however, to introduce components such as conclusions - your signature phrase 'when you step back and analyze...' must never appear in your writing again.
The language used in the essay is very basic and sometimes veers into colloquialisms and casual phrasing. Academic writing is formal writing and requires a higher standard of grammar and vocabulary than secondary level writing: you must make significant improvements in both.
Do not waste your time and money with this company! You will be robbed!!!
AJ.
