If need be, you may paraphrase the paper to remove traces of the paid services in case the university runs a plagiarism check on it or some other validity test that would prove or disprove that you paid for the paper.
Actually, this would only qualify as advice about how to trick a plagiarism scanner to
commit and then conceal plagiarism rather than sensible advice about how to use a model essay
without violating academic honor codes. Using the
ideas of another author without attributing those ideas to the author is also plagiarism, even if you were to rewrite (literally) every single word. You'd still have to cite the original author, and (obviously) no student is ever going to add any kind of "citation" along the lines of (XYZ Essay Company, 2023) to his "paraphrased" writing. The same goes for citing any of the sources in the original work, because it's also plagiarism to cite (Jones, 2007) if that was just a source cited in the model essay (or in any other source you use). The only way to cite a (secondary) source cited in a model essay and avoid academic dishonesty would be to cite it in one of the ways that the citation style being used requires, such as this option in APA 7th: (Jones, 2007, as cited in XYZ Essay Company, 2023).
So there's really no point to rewriting or "paraphrasing" a model essay, just to commit a slightly
different type of plagiarism and academic dishonesty. If you want to use model essays the way they're intended to be used, you'd have to really re-do the entire project yourself, from scratch, including conducting your own original research to find different sources than any of those used in the model essay. In that case, the model essay simply provides examples of how to organize an essay about the topic and how to develop various appropriate sections. "Paraphrasing" the whole thing is a total waste of time, because it's still 100% plagiarism and academic dishonesty to submit someone else's
ideas and/or
research as your own ideas and/or research in your submitted work. (That's the same whether you're talking about model essays or just about how to use source material in your own essays, more generally.)
Universities worldwide have been stepping up their anti essay mill movements because they caught students openly using the same during the pandemic lockdown.
Really? What does the Pandemic have to do with the choice to use an essay company? Aside from the fact that you've posted (many times) that the Pandemic severely hurt this industry, what could the fact that students were attending classes from home
possibly have to do with their choices to use an essay company or writer? Students never wrote their essays
during their in-person classes, in the first place. If anything, wouldn't students quarantining at home only be more likely to try to write their own essays without all of the other social and recreational options normally available before and after the Pandemic? I don't know whether the Pandemic increased or decreased student reliance on this industry; I just know that it can't be
both. Likewise, either "
Universities worldwide have been stepping up their anti essay mill movements because they caught students openly using the same during the pandemic lockdown" OR university professors stopped checking for plagiarism during the Pandemic. Both cannot be true.
The professors cannot be bothered with authenticity checking during the pandemic times.
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It is another company that shut down during the pandemic due to a lack of clients
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They have also managed to survive the pandemic and keep their writers paid, although with heavy CPP adjustments ... They survived the pandemic and manage to pay their writers even though the rates are laughable.
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The rates of the writing companies have been reduced per page since the lockdown. I guess there is not a single business that wasn't hit by the economic downturn of the pandemic.
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Essay mills like to tell their customers "don't turn in our essay; it's for research use only" in the fine print to cover their asses legally.
Precisely. I strongly advise my clients to use my work only as a model, but whether or not they choose to take my advice is entirely their business once I've delivered their projects. Welcome to the forum.