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exwriter   
Jul 03, 2009

Is it a bird?

Is it a plane?

No!!

It's superbrunch ... go superbrunch lol save us all from sites like essaybay and take us with you to essaybrunch where there's no work, and we can assist you in getting the wording on the site grammatically correct, spell checked and proof read so that at least it looks pretty if anyone is foolish enough to pay it a visit lol
exwriter   
Jul 03, 2009
Essay Services / Is term papers corner legit? [39]

there ARE examples of bad grammar in ex's writing (it's the truth, ex),

I completely accept that, ESPECIALLY when writing on the forum, my work is less than perfect, (it doesn't need to be for here), however, when I do write essays. which is not very often, I endeavour to produce perfect work.
exwriter   
Jul 03, 2009
Essay Services / Is term papers corner legit? [39]

Don't be mean! It is not at the Jack and Jill stage yet

I was thinking more of ABC of animals... the cardboard version so IT doesn't bend the corners down lol
exwriter   
Jul 03, 2009

I can recommend a good counsellor for you chacha ... you certainly are in need of one. bet you wear your undies over your trousers like superman lol

what do you call yourself i wonder ... maybe superbrunch lol
exwriter   
Jul 03, 2009
Writing Careers / academia-research reward points [16]

My friend asked AR the same question in relation to the reward points and was initially told that reward points would equal more pay, however they have never received any extra remuneration, and, like you my friend is a premium writer and has been for over 2 years. It would appear that the reward points are useless
exwriter   
Jul 03, 2009

My friend did try talking to admin, whose response was amend or be fined. My friend POINTED out in the message to reassign that the questions HAD been answered fully and THAT the customer had been given more than requested already. Their comment cos my friend said 'I am on holiday' was 'nice', which I am sure you would have seen when you saw the revision advertised. Anyway my aim and my friends aim has been achieved in this post, in that no one -including the customer- can submit this as their own :) and we both would gladly do it again if the same situation arose.

PS I am glad you find it annoying that NO ONE can use the above essay in its entirety, that has made my posting it here all the more worthwhile :)
exwriter   
Jul 03, 2009

pride does make a revision request seem like a slap in the face, though. it makes you want to escape to a mysterious vacation-land without email.

the holiday was already booked way before the revision request came in ...and as you well know...the revision was not a change to the original but extra to be added. Considering the customer only asked for 6 pages and got more than that.... the extra work would amount to another 2 pages. The extra requested was actually in the body of the work if the customer cared to read it properly.
exwriter   
Jul 02, 2009

If my friend was not on holiday they would have submitted this on here theirself and I know this because I asked them before I did it so how's that for a home goal?

isn't resentment about missing a one-off law paper

So you were thinking of taking it then lol

Glad I stopped you in your tracks - oh and by the way so is my friend who I spoke to yesterday and THANKED me for posting the work on here!

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wow, I didn't know your friend was so morally committed to churning out quality term papers for other people to hand in

Does this mean that YOU are NOT committed to turning out QUALITY term papers. My friend takes pride in the work they do, and although does not agree with students turning the work in as their own, knows that there is little that can be done to prevent this from happening. We ALL know that students doing so are cheating and my friend genuinely hopes that her work is used only as a guideline but the only way to ensure that it is not submitted by someone else as their own work is to either sell the work to an essaybank or not write at all.
exwriter   
Jul 02, 2009

Since my friend PREFERS to do EVERY essay from scratch there is no way that my friend would have re-used the essay above. If I hadn't published it here then the customer and/or the new writer would have been able to use this essay and therefore IF my froend had tried to use it later it would have come up as PLAGAIRISED as the student was OBVIOUSLY going to submit this work as their own. So your argument is flawed. I reckon your just annoyed because you were thinking of taking the assignment, believing you only had to add a few extra bits, in order to get a quick return on money. WHEN you realised the essay had been displayed on here you realised that IF you took the order you would have to do the whole thing from scratch, hence the reason you attacked me for publishing my friends work.
exwriter   
Jul 02, 2009
Essay Services / Is term papers corner legit? [39]

OR and exwriter, will you be the first two members to join me in leaving if the mod continues to inexplicably refuse to ban the IP of chacha?

I for one would welcome a domain free from the likes of chacha and EW and all the others who turn this into a personal war. This is supposed to be about exposing rip off companies that cheat not only the customers but also writers.

I notice that essaybrunch has so far managed to 'dish up' zero projects to be written, and is still full of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. I think my 16month old grandaughter could create a better site. maybe chacha should have called it burger king essays- at least a google search might have got the site some response lol

I informed you and party here that do not enter into an argument with me because all of your combined IQ even cannot defeat me...

Gosh wish my IQ was so good i could write in broken english lol BTW I am a member of MENSA so I think my IQ alone exceeds yours -- but combine mine with OR and WB and you are well and truly out ranked. Want to borrow a first reader English book chacha -my grandaughter has a selection of them lol
exwriter   
Jul 02, 2009

I hope my friend wakes up and finds a decent company to write for- one that doesn't rip writers off.

I keep telling my friend to aim higher especially as my friend seems to have a flair for writing!

thank you OR and WB for showing that my friends work is plagairism free. I hope someone can use this as a guideline to write their own term paper then all that hard work hasn't been wasted by my friend
exwriter   
Jul 02, 2009
Essay Services / Is term papers corner legit? [39]

Congratulations WB on not resorting to the diabolical language used by the 'newcomer', and not being baited into retaliating.

This so called 'newbie' is not worthy of a response when they come new into a forum and result to expletives (albeit starred out expletives) with the deliberate intention of atacking a member of the forum. Hopefully the mod will block their account, since I for one have reported them for the language used etc and I am sure others will follow.
exwriter   
Jul 01, 2009

None of it was plagairised lol (see OR's comment), and if it is of such POOR quality as YOU say why would you make the comment that the NEW writer cannot use this now. IF it was such POOR quality why would they want to use it. ANYWAY WB I know how you are good at spotting grammatical faux pas would you consider the grammar to be loaded with errors.

Also in relation to the quotes, the essay does contain quotes, just for some reason when I copied and pasted the work the quoted passages do not show up as quoted passages, but if you would like I will personally highlight the bits that are direct quotes from judges, text books etc.
exwriter   
Jul 01, 2009

posting this paper-- wtf do you think you are, some kind of knight of the downpressed? please, do me a favor and stop feeling good about yourself. you are being a total cheese-eater.

I reckon EW is right about who took the revision order lol. Why should someone get to use my friends GOOD quality essay when they did not contribute to it, especially when the company fined her $5 for NOT doing the revision. So you think its fair that my friend gets NOTHING for this piece and in fact has to pay the company $5 for writing such an excellent piece. I don't think so!!

The revision request was TOTALLY not necessary. The things asked for WERE in the body of the work, but the customer wanted extra adding, some of which were not even asked for in the original request.

If you did take this order rusty I am so pleased that you had to do the whole thing from scratch it makes posting this on here worthwhile
exwriter   
Jun 29, 2009

Rareplants Ltd / ABC Accountants Ltd / Drivers Essays



My friend wrote the below essay. The customer asked for a revision despite the fact that it contained all the necessary information. The customer wanted a 2:2 paper 6 pages long. The below is longer than requested yet the customer wanted more adding. This was a piece for academia research aka masterpapers for which my friend was going to get $30. My friend is away on holiday so could not do revision anyway so asked for this to be reassigned. She was fined $5 for this. Just so the customer cannot use the essay written by my friend I am posting it on here, hopefully plagiarism detector will pick it up as I am guessing the customer is still going to use this.

Rareplants Ltd



In order to advise the parties in this scenario it is necessary to consider the liability of Rareplants Ltd based on a claim under tort law, as well as any claim that might be brought against the company under statutory obligations. This will involve consideration of the Occupier's Liability Act 1957 as well as the Occupiers Liability Act 1984. The main difference between the 1957 Act and the 1984 Act is that the former applies to lawful visitors whilst the latter relates to the duty of an occupier to unlawful visitors. S2(2) of the 1957 Act places a statutory duty on the occupier to

take such care as in all the circumstances of the case is reasonable to see that the visitor will be reasonably safe in using the premises for the purposes for which he is invited or permitted to be there.

Law, Accounting, Drivers PaperClerk and Lindsell (2000) make the point that the term premises should properly be described as land, as case law consistently demonstrates how the courts have defined the statute to encompass the land owned by the occupier . The occupier of the land has been determined using the 'control test', as defined by Lord Denning in Wheat v Lacon (1966) , where he held that the extent of the control over the land should be the determining factor. In Bailey v Armes [1999] the court held that the managers of a supermarket should not be regarded as the occupiers of the flat roof above the supermarket where they lived as it was outside their accommodation. However, in Ribbie v Norrie [2000] the court held that a landlord who did not live at the accommodation was the occupier has he had the ability to control the area in which the fire had been started.

The safety of premises was discussed in Manning v Hope [2000] in which the court held that the lack of a handrail on the staircase was sufficient for the court to conclude that the premises were unsafe. Before the courts will hold another liable the possibility that such harm might be caused has to be reasonably foreseeable. In Nessa v Walsall Metropolitan Borough Council [2000] the court stated that the risk of injury could be regarded as reasonably foreseeable if a reasonable person would have considered the slope on the slide to be dangerous. The court also requires that the risk of injury is sufficient before apportioning liability on the occupier. In Fryer v Pearson [2000] the court felt that as the level of injury was only minimal the risk of injury could not be regarded as significant.

The courts have shown a reluctance to accept claims under the 1957 Act where the plaintiff is partly responsible for their injury as demonstrated in Ingram v Davison-Lungley [2000] , where the court found that the actions of the appellant in turning around on the swimming pool steps was not foreseeable and was an unusual way for the appellant to enter the water.

The 1984 Act offers a degree of protection for unlawful visitors. Extra duty is placed on occupiers for the safety of children trespassing on the land then on adults . This was emphasised in Phipps v Rochester Corporation [1955] where the court stated that the occupier should only have the same degree of care towards the child as the parents of the child would have. Liability for trespassers is imposed if the appellant can prove that the occupier is (a) aware of the danger or has reasonable grounds to believe that it exists; knows or has reasonable grounds to believe that the trespasser is in or may come into the vicinity of the danger; and (c) the risk is one against which, in all the circumstances of the case he may reasonably be expected to offer the other some protection . In Keown v Coventry Healthcare NHS Trust [2006] the court held that despite the fact that the injured party was a trespasser, the Trust owed a duty of care to ensure the premises were safe. The court stated a greater degree of duty was owed as the injured party was a minor and the fire escape was an obvious inducement for a child to want to climb on.

In British Railways Board v Herrington [1972] the Lordships held that there was a limited duty of care to trespassers. In this case the children had wandered onto the railway line due to the failure of BR to repair the fencing. The court held that BR had a duty to ensure the line was properly fenced in so as to prevent anyone from straying onto the line.

Using the above it is likely that the court would hold Rareplants Ltd liable for the injuries to the elderly male, as they failed to make the premises safe for the coach party, despite the fact that certain areas had been roped off and notices displayed. Case law demonstrates that the courts will not uphold the disclaimers for liability in respect of personal injuries, so the notice at the entrance cannot be relied upon to absolve the company for liability.

With regard to the nervous shock claimed by the parents, the courts would have to determine the proximity of the victim to the event as well as the relationship of the parties. In this case it is the mother of the children who disappeared that suffered nervous shock. This would satisfy the relationship requirement as evidenced in McLoughlin v O'Brian [1983] . In this case the plaintiff was the mother of the victim who had come across the immediate aftermath of the accident . The court felt that it was reasonably foreseeable that she would suffer nervous shock and ruled that the relationship of the parties satisfied the proximity test . However, in Hevican v Ruane [1991] a claim for psychiatric harm was rejected on the grounds that the claimant had not witnessed the accident but had been told about it a couple of hours later.

It is likely in the above that the court would award compensation for the injury suffered by the elderly male as well as the nervous shock claimed, as the premises were not safe for visitors, despite the attempts to rope off dangerous areas and the erection of warning signs. The court might also find the company in breach of Health and Safety Regulations, as the walkway was not safe for visitors, and the use of ropes would be inadequate to prevent visitors from straying of the planned route.

ABC Accountants Ltd



This particular scenario will involve a discussion on professional negligence as well as general negligence. With regard to the financial advice a distinction will need to be made between a regulated financial advisor and an unregulated one. The starting point in any claims for negligence is to show that a duty of care existed between the parties . It is then necessary to show that the duty has been breached and as a result of the breach the plaintiff has suffered harm or financial loss .

When considering if a duty of care is owed the courts will look at the proximity of the plaintiff to the damage caused . The principle of proximity has developed from the test applied in Donoghue v Stevenson and is generally applied after a duty of care has been established. The principle of 'fair, just and reasonable' was emphasised in the case of Spring v Guardian Assurance Plc when making a decision concerning the imposition of liability. The case of Donogue v Stevenson marked the advent of the neighbour test the general principle being that 'you must not injure your neighbour'. The neighbour test confers a duty on all persons to take reasonable care to avoid acts or omissions which that person ought to reasonably foresee might cause harm to another.

Having established the elements required to prove negligence it is possible to examine the liabilities of all of the parties in the above situation. Starting with the financial advice and using the principles above it can be established that a duty of care was owed to Lucy to ensure that the advice she was given was correct. If the person giving the advice is aware that the recipient would be relying on their expertise as a financial advisor, and that as a result of this advice they would be likely to invest a substantial amount of money, the person giving this advice can be held liable if the advice is incorrect.

When assessing negligence the court will judge whether the advice given fell below the standard of the reasonable man . The reasonable man standard is not a set standard and the standard required can vary according to the skills that are to be expected of a defendant in that line of work. It is usual for the courts to set a higher standard for a doctor than they would for a road sweeper.

In this case, as the person giving the advice is working as part of a company, Lucy might be able to bring a claim against the company as well as the advisor, using the principle of vicarious liability. In Seymour v Caroline Ockwell & Co [2005] the plaintiff brought an action against both the company and the financial advisor when negligent financial advice caused the plaintiff a financial loss. The court held that the financial advisor was liable for the loss due to the negligent advice but also held the company liable for having failed to disclose information to the financial advisor about the investment that might have impacted on his advice to the plaintiff.

If the person giving the advice is a regulated financial advisor then compensation might be able to be claimed through Financial Services Compensation Scheme if the advisor does not have the financial resources to compensate the plaintiff. In Investors Compensation Scheme Ltd v West Bromwich Building Society the defendant were ordered to compensate the elderly property owners they had given negligent advice to. In this case the defendants were independent regulated financial advisors.

In Hedley Byrne v Heller & Partners Ltd [1964] , a claim for pure economic loss was allowed, after the court found that the respondent had supplied information to the plaintiff which they ought to have known that the plaintiff would rely on. Liability was only avoided as a result of the disclaimer made by the respondent to the plaintiff, prior to the giving of the advice . In Candler v Crane, Christmas & Co [1951] the court held that there was no contractual relationship between the parties and that as a result of the disclaimer, the respondent was not liable for the negligent advice. In Caparo Industries Plc v Dickman [1990] the court stated that it was the duty of the plaintiff to prove that the respondent owed them a duty of care, and that the performance of the respondent was below the standard set by law. There also needs to be a causal link between the actions of the defendant and the damage caused.

Applying this to the above, Lucy could argue that the advice given was negligent and therefore the person given that advice should be held responsible for her losses. She might also be able to claim against the company relying on vicarious liability. However, the comments made before the advice was given could amount to a disclaimer, which could result in the court refusing to hold the respondent liable, especially as the advice was given on an informal basis, rather than a formal consultation.

Drivers A and B



In this case, it is necessary to discuss how the courts might determine negligence, as well as the possibility of a claim for nervous shock by a secondary victim. It is also necessary to discuss the chain of causation in order to determine whether driver B can be held liable for all of the injuries caused, or whether the hospital can be held partly responsible for the additional hospitalisation.

Duty of care was first addressed in Donoghue v Stevenson . As a result of this case the neighbour test came into existence. This case was important because it established the right of the applicant to bring an action against a manufacturer rather than against the retailer. In recent times the courts have altered the principle into the proximity test. This test was used by the courts in Heaven v Pender . The plaintiff in this case was able to persuade the court to hold the employer liable for not providing a safe working environment for the plaintiff. The court held that the staging and ropes were not fit to be used, and that as a result of that the plaintiff was involved in a serious accident. In summing up Brett MR made the observation that

whenever one person is by circumstances placed in such a position with regard to another, that every one of ordinary sense who did think would at once recognise that if he did not use ordinary care and skill in his own conduct with regard to those circumstances he would cause danger of injury to the person or property of the other, a duty arises to use ordinary care and skill to avoid such danger.

It is obvious that driver B owed a duty of care to all other road users to ensure that his driving did not fall below the standard of the reasonable man. As a result of his negligent driving, driver A has sustained injuries, therefore, it is likely that the court would hold driver B responsible for the harm caused.

Driver B could face charges for dangerous driving. Archbold (32-37) describes dangerous driving in the following manner

A person drives dangerously when the way he/she drives falls far below what would be expected of a competent and careful driver AND it would be obvious to a competent and careful driver that driving in that way would be dangerous.

Under section 2A(1) of the Road Traffic Act 1988 both parts of the above definition must be present for the driving to be considered dangerous. 'Far below' is not defined by statute but the danger of causing serious injury to a person of property would be regarded as 'far below '. Dangerous driving can be averred if the condition of the vehicle is considered to be dangerous . A finding of dangerous driving would entitle driver A to claim compensation for his injuries.

Driver B could try to limit his liability for the harm caused by demonstrating that the injuries were made more severe as a direct result of the negligent treatment by the doctor. Driver B could argue that the actions of the medical staff broke the chain of causation , and that liability should be apportioned between himself as well as the hospital. In R v Jordan [1956] the court concluded that the initial injury was not the operative cause of the victim's death. The court stated that the victim would have survived if the hospital treatment had not been negligent. However, in R v Mellors [1996] , the court refused to accept that the chain of causation had been broken, despite the evidence of the negligent treatment given by the hospital . The courts reached a similar conclusion in R v Smith . In R v Dyos the court apportioned liability between the respondent and the hospital, as the plaintiff could not prove that all the injuries suffered were a direct result of the actions of the respondent.

With the claim for nervous shock it is necessary to consider the proximity of the plaintiff to the incident. In this case, the plaintiff was errantly told that the injuries were significantly worse then they actually were, and claims nervous shock as a result. Given that she would be regarded as a secondary victim, and that she was not in close proximity at the time of the accident, the court may well decide not to award compensation for such harm. The test of foreseeability and proximity was evidenced in Alcock and Others v Chief Constable of the South Yorkshire Police [1991] , in which Lord Oliver made the point that 'the elements of immediacy, closeness of time and space and direct visual or aural perception', are essential in order for a claim for psychiatric harm to succeed.

In order to claim for psychiatric harm the plaintiff has to prove that they are suffering from a recognised psychiatric illness. In Alcock the court refused to accept claims were the plaintiff was merely suffering from grief, anxiety, fear or distress . In general, awards are only made where the effects are long lasting. Watching a relative slowly dying was not considered to satisfy the rule for a claim for psychiatric harm in Sion v Hampstead Health Authority [1994] . For such a claim to succeed the court felt that the illness would have to have been triggered by shock from the original incident.

Applying the above to the scenario, it would seem likely that driver B would be ordered to compensate driver A for the injuries suffered, although part of this liability might be apportioned to the hospital. In relation to the nervous shock, the wife of driver A is unlikely to succeed as she was not in close proximity to the incident.

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exwriter   
May 30, 2009
Essay Services / About Essay brunch [154]

I decided for fun to register with the munch bunch at essaybrunch lol clicked on search projects to get the message no record exsit lol oh dear the grammatical errors continue... here chacha be a good boy and go fix it lol
exwriter   
May 30, 2009
Essay Services / About Essay brunch [154]

Can I have fries to go with that order chacha lol
exwriter   
May 30, 2009
Essay Services / About Essay brunch [154]

Your not even trying lol

Give it a shot lol

I notice its still under development, which probably suggests that there won't be any projects available right now.
exwriter   
May 30, 2009
Essay Services / About Essay brunch [154]

aww come on WB you know you wanna SINGUP lol
exwriter   
May 30, 2009
Essay Services / About Essay brunch [154]

Why would anyone one want to SINGUP to such a site lol. I really loved the buyer SINGUP and writer SINGUP section lol only trouble was I couldn't think of anything to sing lol
exwriter   
May 29, 2009

How do you feel now?

I feel fine strangely enough lol. I was merely pointing out that IF this site WAS your ONLY source of work, that 11 orders divided amongst god knows how many writers would hardly constitute being swamped.

Essaybay also seems to have quite a lot of OPEN orders, but very few where writers have been selected for the projects. Seems to suggest that customers are not quite so enamoured with the service as they have posted their projects and then not bothered to select a writer to assist.
exwriter   
May 28, 2009

The level and quality of experience that someone undertakes to reach fellowship level is far more intense than anything taught on the LPC.

That is such a joke. The first company I went to work for after graduating law school was not a law company nor connected to law in anyway. They knew I was interested in pursuing my career in law and invited me to undertake an ILEX course whilst working for them. I spoke to the course organiser who stated that I would gain nothing from taking that course as my qualifications were substantially higher than the ILEX course, which is his opinion was a midway qualification between an A level and a degree.

The fact that you do not know that LPC students are registered suggests that you did not do this course as everyone who does this course would know that there name would appear in the register upon successful completion of the course. If you are now claiming to have completed this using a different name, maybe you might like to disclose the surname used so that your details can be verified against the register.
exwriter   
May 28, 2009

because despite it being the low season, I'm still pretty swamped with work.

you claim to be swamped with work, would this be through EW site? I don't think so, given that, even though I do not write for this company, I have an account with them, and decided to check the available orders page this morning, only to note that there are only 11 available projects displayed lol hardly SWAMPED huh lol
exwriter   
May 28, 2009

Are screwed over by the company. Added to that exorbitant fines etc for supposed complaints from customers and the company rub their hands with glee!

To them, for every writer that gets fed up and walks, there are several more waiting in line to replace them.
exwriter   
May 28, 2009

Do not let this nonsensical debate over Jennifer's qualifications, or lack thereof, overwhelm WB's presentation of credible evidence.

I am not trying to take this off topic, i was merely pointing out that if one of the company's representatives can LIE about their qualifications why should we trust anything else she says on their behalf, as I am sure WB would agree.

Legal executives are not recognised as lawyers amongst the true legal profession of barristers and solicitors and do not have the same rights of audience at court. Jennifer raised the issue herself that she is a lawyer in this thread

I'm a qualified lawyer with 6+ years of experience and a current practising certificate

A fact she KNOWS I CAN and HAVE disproved. You will note that she has not come back to refute my comments because she knows that she is unable to do so as A LEGAL EXECUTIVE IS NOT IN THE TRUE SENSE OF THE WORD A LAWYER but MERELY provides similar functions to a lawyer. FACT.

would you trust someone who claimed to be a doctor to perform surgery when in fact that person was only a paramedic? This has happened in the UK were people have posed as professionals without in fact having the necessary qualifications.

My reason for highlighting her LIES is to demonstrate her and the company's lack of integrity, which ergo leads to the question should we believe her claims that using Raptor will not lead to AA having rights over the writers work, through which they can sell this work WITHOUT paying the true author for the work provided?
exwriter   
May 27, 2009

Seriously though ... I thought that UKessays paid writers 40-50% of the total? A few REAL American companies pay 50%.

Thats what they would like you to believe, but from personal experience I can confirm that this is not the case. Writers get roughly a third of what the company charges the customer.
exwriter   
May 27, 2009

LL.B 1st class honours?

That does not make you a lawyer. I have many friends who have the same qualification who are not even remotely connected to the legal profession since completing their degree.

on the same site you quote from re legal executives it states

Specialising in a particular area of law, their day-to-day work is similar to that of a solicitor

Similar ie not the same as. How much do YOU actually know about the UK legal system. Jennifer professed, quite some time ago, that she is a lawyer. I asked if she had completed the LPC to which she stated that she had. I checked with the law society and found this to be a fallacy, ergo she lied about her qualification. If she can lie about that in order to attract students to use her services why should we trust her, the company she works for or any other services offered through that company.

I find it strange that you feel the need to defend someone who blatantly lied about their qualifications, and only gave up on that lie when she was exposed. Would you REALLY trust someone like that, if so then maybe your intellect should be questioned.
exwriter   
May 27, 2009

You have solicitors, lawyers, barristers and attorneys - they have different functions but, at the end of the day, have graduated law school.

She did the FILEX course THAT makes her a legal executive NOT a LAWYER. She DID NOT do the LPC, which at one point she tried to claim, until I proved that she IS NOT registered with the LAW SOCIETY. Legal Executives perform a similar role to LAWYERS/SOLICITORS but you do not gain the right to call yourself a lawyer or a solicitor UNLESS you complete the LPC. The FILEX site refers to members as similar to lawyers, however, Jennifer COULD NOT set herself up in business as a solicitor WITHOUT doing the LPC course, and could only offer her services as a legal executive. Legal executives DO get to represent clients in court, but DO NOT have the same rights of audience as solicitors or barristers.

Many people choose the legal executive route into law as it is not as costly as the law school route, and many also hope to persuade their employers to fund their LPC or BVC course whilst working as a legal exevutive or a paralegal. I have many friends who are now practising solicitors and barristers who goy in through this route. The fact that Jennifer has never progressed to completion of the LPC shows that either her employers were unwilling to fund this route, or that she lacked the capability to complete the LPC. As she once stated that she had done the LPC course, it seems reasonable to assume that she failed, given that her name does not appear within the law society's list of qualified LPC students, unless of course she now wishes to proclaim that she NEVER even attempted the LPC course.
exwriter   
Apr 22, 2009

Proving Jennifer to be a liar soon stopped her from posting her drivel and attempting to promote the company. It should be blatantly obvious to everyone that the only reason she averred to having qualifications she did not have was to give the impression that anyone wanting a quality law essay would be guaranteed to get one as she was responsible for quality control, and so therefore would be able to spot any old pile of drivel.

To show how bad the company are at quality control, I got a colleague to sign up with the company some time ago. He was assigned a piece on commercial law and provided the company with the biggest load of drivel you have ever seen, didn't even attempt to answer the question posed. QA checked the work and sent it to the customer, who rightly complained. My colleague was asked to amend which he contested and gave the QA dept a list of book pages he supposedly got his info from. Most of the quoted books never even existed. The QA dept wrote back to the customer quoting the sources, which the customer attempted to check but obviously could not find them. Eventually the QA must have sent the essay somewhere else for a quality check as they then wrote back to my friend and told him that the work was so poor that it would not even score a pass and told him that they were terminating his contract. Its a good job that the student recognised that the work was not up to standard, as they would have surely have failed if they had submitted it. Even the grammar was so appalling you would have thought a kindergarten child had written it. Let this be a warning to those tempted to use AA DO NOT RELY ON ASSURANCE THAT THE WORK HAS BEEN CHECKED FOR QUALITY.
exwriter   
Apr 18, 2009
Essay Services / howtowriteadissertation.co.uk [20]

Ok. I don't really care about AA's sister websites but I do wonder, if you're saying that they are overpriced then that must mean that they get less of the market share.

Not necessarily. They might get more of the market share because students prefer a native writer, and feel that some of the cheaper companies are employing ESL writers, hence the reason why they charge less. Some people naively believe that the more you pay the better service you will get. This is not true in any area of purchasing of goods or services. In fact, some of the cheaper goods or services can often be better than the dearer ones.

As an example, a friend of mine recently went on a holiday abroad for which she paid £400. The same holiday was offered on a late booking for £170 which a friend of hers bought. They both had exactly the same accomodation in the same hotel, but one paid half the price of the other because she took a late booking. This just goes to show that paying less does not mean getting less in terms of value for money.
exwriter   
Apr 18, 2009
Essay Services / howtowriteadissertation.co.uk [20]

If you're presenting an unbiased observation then I'm sure that you also saw a lot of orders which were very specifically defined.

more than 80% of the law and criminology ones

My only point is that WB claims that Academic Answers' products are overpriced where in fact, EB's rates are some of the lowest available in the industry.

They are overpriced compared to some sites, maybe not so much the EB as the writer sets the price themselves, but cetainly with their sister companies such as ukessays etc. AA comes in many different disguises nowadays, you only have to try applying for writing jobs for different companies to see how many are affiliated with AA, and they all charge different prices but employ the same writers.

I wouldnt be surprised if the essays offered for bid on EB are not challenged from UKessays where a suitable writer could not be found, especially judging by the glut of law essays being offered
exwriter   
Apr 18, 2009
Essay Services / howtowriteadissertation.co.uk [20]

Dissertation HowI can indeed confirm that I outed Jennifer for her consistent lies. It seems to be a consistent theme with Academic Answers given that Barclay himself CLAIMS to be a barrister, but in fact got no further than law school. I suppose they reckon that hyping up their qualifications gives them some form of kudos, makes you wonder whether they HYPE up the qualification of their writers too in order to convince customers that the quality of the work will be better then their rivals.

Having recently visited essaybay (under a pseudonym) I noted that orders that are on offer rarely specify the full question or word limit, meaning that the writer has to contact the customer before they can bid on them. quite surprisingly, a number of writers still bid without knowing this information.

How can they do this and be sure that they will be able to do the work justice? When a query is posted to the customer they rarely reply, so are they seriously expecting someone to bid on their work not knowing the full details or the length of the piece. I also noted that there are a huge amount of orders that are on then from before Christmas, which seems to suggest that there is a problem with the system.

I wonder whether the customer is discouraged from giving the full details of the assignment until they have selected a writer who has bid on this without knowing these details, so that writers can be conned into writing 5000 words for less than you would pay for your weekly shopping! Some on there bid ridiculously low amounts of $58, which is not too bad if the word limit is 1000 words but pretty rubbish if the limit is 3000 words don't you think?
exwriter   
Apr 16, 2009
Writing Careers / Superwriter.us Information [29]

Maybe i should do it and email it to work lol use their paper and ink lol i dont think so lol

Im not that desperate for work
exwriter   
Apr 16, 2009
Writing Careers / Superwriter.us Information [29]

Very attractive!

thought you would be impressed lol I couldnt believe it when they asked if i would be interested lol 60 pages for $180 yeah right dream on lol
exwriter   
Apr 16, 2009
Writing Careers / Superwriter.us Information [29]

Below is one of the assignments available on this site. I wonder why they want this doing?

622008 - Re-Write the Whole Website masterpapers.com

Order summary: Attached files:

Requested pages: 60
Academic level: SEO Professional
Style: Re-Writing
Language: English US
Page cost: $ 3.0000
Total: $ 180.0000
7 days 15 hours

Not Available

Order instructions:

We need page by page re-writing of following websites. Please evaluate the sites and their embedded blogs, count total pages and estimate the quantity of text to be re-written. The content will be used for competitive new sites of our clients. You need write the 100% Original content by keeping SEO tags/links/words/term/keywords/key phrases/ of these sites intact. Please quote your prices and time for all sites separately as these sites will be done one by one by selected provider(s). We need very high quality web contents as output. No beginners please, this order is for experienced and time trusted content writers only.You will be required to do page by page rewriting in a way that at the top of page you will copy paste the content from assigned site, and after a horizontal line below this text you will re-write [your original writing] your own text. Word count and key words should strictly match with the original text from given website. Your given content will be checked by dupefree and copyscape for any duplication and plagiarism. Bad quality content, duplications and plagiarism may reject the whole project. Payment will be made after finishing one site's working. Then next site will assigned to you for working.The site we need you to re-write for our client is: masterpapers.com If site has 60 pages, you will submit 60 word files with original and re-written content. File's names will be the page title/names of the actual site e.g., index/home, order, about us, inquiry, quality, essay, termpaper etc.

Note:
In case of more or less pages on the site, payment will be adjusted accordingly
exwriter   
Apr 16, 2009

I was invited to write for superwriters.us but at $4 a page there is absolutely no way they are getting my sevices, especially when they expect 375 words per page for that!
exwriter   
Feb 26, 2009

The research papers published in International journals are many times written by Indian researchers.

Your use of the English language is appalling. There are so many grammatical mistakes that correcting them would take an eternity. This proves that all your assertions about being able to write for UK students is false given that any UK university receiving such drivel would know that the person writing the essay was an ESL writer not an EFL one.

You are a poor representative of Indian writers since every post you have made has glaring mistakes that would make an EFL writer cringe.