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amirafahmy   
Oct 21, 2015

Investing Tax-Payers Money in Arts or Public Services?



Question: Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

IELTS Writing MoneyNowadays, the government is spending money on arts, like music and theater. Some people advocate this idea and others argue that this money should not be wasted and must be used in public services. I believe that this statement is terribly wrong.

The arts of the county is of out most importance to its culture. What defines a country is its art, so the government should fund money in building theaters in order to give a chance for preforming folklore dancing and arts. In addition, the government must also invest money in operas to give a chance for the people to show their talents especially in singing. The operas can also open temporary galleries for extremely talented photographers who captures natural photos of their country and people preforming their traditions.

Moreover, the arts are also beneficial for economical reasons. If the government help in building museums, it will not only show the country's art, but also will attract the tourists. Hence, the government will make profit from them. Lastly, should the government invest money in constructing a land , which will hold a festival every weekend with folklore music and food, more people from all over the world will be willing to visit and learn more about the country. Thus, the tourism will improve and more money will be made.

In conclusion, i am a strong advocate to the idea of investing money in the arts. Since it will not only improve the county culturally, but also financially.

* PLEASE RATE OUT OF 9*
amirafahmy   
Oct 25, 2015

Question: Fewer and fewer people are using handwriting. What are the main reasons for this? Will this cause a negative or positive development?

Handwriting Usage



IELTS HandwritingNowadays, people tend to use less handwriting. This is caused by many reasons and will have a negative impact on us.

Without a shadow of a doubt, technology plays a major role in deducing the use of handwriting. People prefer to use not only keyboards, but also touch screens for typing more than handwriting as it's easier and faster to use. Moreover, typing will guarantee you to understand the text no matter how bad or good the handwriting is. In addition, some researchers proven that handwriting can cause hand pain, especially in long texts, that's why some people like to use typing.

The extinction of handwriting will cause a lot of problems in our society. As not everyone can afford buying electronic devices, there will be barriers in communication. Besides, if low standard people cant buy electronic devices, more pressure is added to their lives as they can't reach people's demand.

In conclusion, using typing is a lot easier and better ; nevertheless, the continuously use of it and stopping using the handwriting will cause issues in our society.

*please rate from 9 *
Note that i havent reach the word count so i want to know will this make me fall to 5.5 cause i need at least 6 in this task
amirafahmy   
Oct 26, 2015

Yeah i totally agree with you, but unfortunately i wrote this in my exam but i guess i wrote more complex sentences, so do you think it's so bad that it will prevent me from getting a 6
amirafahmy   
Oct 26, 2015

Reeally oh what a relief. I was scared that the word count and that lack of development of ideas would make me fall to 5.5. Thank you so muchh