So this is what I submitted in my rewrite request to an essay corporation writing office:

"I did find some grammar mistakes, but that is to be expected, and I am not concerned with that.

However, I am concerned with the following 4 things:

1. The paper was supposed to formatted with 1 inch margins (as per the information in the FAQ). It was not. It was formatted with 1.25 inch margins.

2. At the beginning of each paragraph, there was a double indentation instead of a single one.

3. The reference page should be a separate page in addition to the 7 pages, and not part of the 7 pages.

Correcting for the above 3 items, barely makes 6.25 pages of text.

4. This is the most IMPORTANT point. In my directions for the paper, I asked that there be a thesis question formulated and argued. The sample paper was simply a research paper with no argument. That is exactly what I stated I DID NOT WANT the paper to be."

I thought I was very nice considering the blatant attempt to use up space by changing the formatting.

What do you all think?

Also, perhaps I should just do the revision myself instead of trying to get the writer do it?