Essaybrah's sample has numerous errors. I ran it through Grammarly:
" I have always felt strongly that we don't 1 ( do not ) need unions at Wal-Mart... . 2 ( . ) The
partnership we have at 3 ( in, on ) Wal-Mart - which includes profit sharing, incentive
bonuses, discount stock purchase plans, and a genuine effort to involve the associates
in the business so we can pull together - works better for both sides than any situation
I know of involving unions." 4 These are the words of Sam Walton, the founder of Wal-Mart.
In the last decade 5 the retailer has been challenged by many of its employees who are leaning
towards unionization. The corporate giant traditionally shuns its workers from unionizing and has
gone as far as subtly getting rid of employees who advocate the cause. Unionizing typically
allows the voices of employees to be heard and while improving their working conditions . 6
( . ) 7 Wal-Mart begs to differ and feels that unionizing is nothing more than a cult-like organization.
They believe that the current conditions allow associates to be part of the bigger corporate
picture. 8 The question is not which system is better, but rather how ethical it is for Wal-Mart
to prevent employees from unionizing. 9 There have been a few stores that have been able to unionize, but the scenario is incredibly rare.
