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strugglingstudent   
Nov 04, 2008
Essay Services / Essaybay, what do you think? [264]

Actually you are wrong there! those on the homepage are the ones that have the jighest rating. the ratings are based on customer feedback so therefore if a customer has only written one piece and the customer gives them 100% then they will appear in the ratings as a top writer. By the same token one piece with negative feedback can place that writer at the bottom of the ranking order as the percentages are also based on the number of orders completed.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 22, 2008

On behalf of a friend I have been asked to post an essay she wrote for academia-research.com. When she was given this order no essential sources were requested by the customer. After completion the student then started asking for essential sources to be included. The student also changed the title of the essay and asked for all the changes in the CJA to be discussed and not just the sentencing changes. Anyway several emails later and my friend had the order reassigned to another writer. My friend just wants to make sure the student cannot still use her work by submitting it on the internet so that a university plagairism scanner will probably pick this up.

I told her that academia research should have intervened in this argument and told the student that as she did not specify sources at the beginning she could not ask for changes of this kind later. I told my friend that I would post the piece on here to help her in her cause to stop her work being submitted when she has not been paid anything for it.

Criminal Justice AcademiaHere is the essay, which according to the student does not deal with the changes in the CJA and does not answer the question posed. Glad to see academia look after their writers (not)

Criminal Justice Act 2003 and the reduction of sentence for guilty pleas



Introduction

This study intends to examine the way in which the Criminal Justice Act 2003 has impacted on the English legal system. In order to do this it will be necessary to discuss the specific changes introduced by the Act and the intention of the government in introducing these changes. A brief overview of the content of the Act and when it came into force will be included in the opening section. The study will then go on to discuss what the government had hoped to achieve through the introduction of the Act and the difficulties that have been experienced in implementing those changes. Within this framework the research paper will consider the rationale for the changes and the benefits that the government anticipated would be experienced through the reforms.

Having discussed the reasons behind the changes and the anticipated benefits to the community the paper will examine whether those expectations have been achieved. This will involve studying whether crime levels have decreased or increased since its introduction.

The main thesis of this paper is to consider the impact on the community and on the crime rate in relation to sentence reduction in situations where the accused enters a guilty plea. This study will also consider whether the new legislation has assisted in speeding up the legal process in getting cases heard at an earlier opportunity and the advantages and disadvantages of speeding up this process.

From the above it should be possible to reach a conclusion on the effectiveness of the Criminal Justice Act 2003 and to highlight the failures and successes that have resulted from the changes.

Criminal Justice Act 2003 - A brief overview of the need for reform



The Criminal Justice Act 2003 received Royal Assent in November 2003 and was introduced in response to problems highlighted by a series of reports conducted by the Home Office, the Ministry of Justice and the Law Commission. The central theme that seems to emanate from all of these reports is the need for reform in the criminal justice system. All of the reports seem to highlight the frustration caused by the delay in getting cases brought before the courts, the rise in crime levels nationally, overcrowding in prisons and the unnecessary problems caused by the misdirection of cases to the relevant courts.

In 2001 a White Paper issued by the Home Office entitled Justice for All highlighted the need for reform of the criminal justice system. The paper focussed on previous studies carried out by Sir Robin Auld (2001) and John Halliday (2001). Both of these papers were commissioned with the intention of determining the need for reform of the criminal justice system. Sir Robin Auld's paper entitled A Review of the Criminal Courts of England and Wales looked at the specific area of re-structuring within the court system and reviewing the allocation of work to the various courts. Sir Auld was concerned that in many instances cases were being directed to the wrong courts and that issues that could be dealt with in the Magistrates courts were being referred to the Crown Court. The process of transferring cases in this manner was causing a backload of cases to mount up and would often result in unnecessary delays in bringing the accused to justice. The aim of his paper was to emphasise the need to reform the court procedure so that matters could be dealt with more expeditiously and that only the more serious cases would be sent to the Crown court. In his paper he highlights the need for better management of the criminal justice system as a whole and makes it clear that in many cases unnecessary work is created within the system.

Sir Auld highlighted that one of the main reasons why cases were sent to the wrong court was that the accused not being charged with the appropriate charge. He pinpoints the way in which the police have traditionally been responsible for making charging decisions and comments that he feels this is inappropriate since officers lack the legal skills to determine the correct charge. This issue was addressed in the Justice for All report where recommendations were made to place the responsibility for charging decisions to be handled by the Crown Prosecution Service. It was deemed to be a logical solution to the problem highlighted by Sir Auld since prosecutors have the necessary qualification to determine the most appropriate charge for the offence. When the Criminal Justice Act 2003 was enacted these recommendations were included within the Act and the responsibility for charging advice was transferred from the police onto the CPS.

Halliday (2001) was commissioned to focus on reforms within the punishments meted out by the courts. In his paper, Making Punishments Work, he was asked to consider the deficiencies within the sentencing framework and the effectiveness on crime reduction through the sentencing of offenders. Within his paper he examined the responses of the general public to the regime at that time and noted that public confidence in the criminal justice system was very low. He commented that serious reforms were needed in order to increase public confidence and also that sentencing policies needed to be reviewed in order to ensure that the punishment fitted the crime. Halliday stated that for many offenders and offence types the use of custodial sentences was not the most appropriate form of punishment.

Justice for All reflected the recommendations made by both of these reports and emphasised the need for changes to the CJS in order to make the system more cost effective and efficient. This report recommended the establishment of the Sentencing Guidance Council whose role it would be to determine the most appropriate sentence for the offence committed. Their remit would also be to look at new forms of punishment that could be applied as an alternative to custodial sentences. The reasoning behind this was that in many cases prison was no longer regarded as a deterrent by offenders and rates of recidivism seemed to suggest that imprisonment did not work.

Implementation of the recommendations into the CJA 2003



These comments were reflected in the changes enacted by the CJA 2003 which has resulted in the reduction of sentences for guilty pleas. The government believed that by reducing sentences overcrowding in prisons would be eased. Encouraging guilty pleas was aimed at reducing costs incurred through unnecessary court actions as well as speeding up the justice process. They believed that this would also have the knock-on effect of increasing public confidence in the CJS as they would be encouraged by the fact that offenders were brought to justice more speedily.

Although sentence reduction is more likely to occur in less serious crimes, the government believed that sentences could also be reduced for more serious crimes if the accused entered a guilty plea at the earliest possible opportunity. The government felt that obtaining a guilty plea from the accused would not only save the expense of a lengthy trial but would also spare the victim or the families of the victim from having to go through the ordeal of a trial. In order to stave off criticism from the public in relation to sentence reduction for more serious crimes the courts were instructed that an admission of guilt was insufficient unless the accused fully admitted the offence and demonstrated that they were aware that their actions were wrong.

In order to be able to achieve an increase in the number of guilty pleas the government had to also include reforms within the CJA in relation to the early disclosure of evidence. Traditionally the prosecution would not disclose all elements of the case against the accused until the trial date was imminent. At this stage a full file would have been completed by the police and would contain all the evidence the prosecution would be relying on in court to prove the guilt of the defendant.

Under the reforms the police now have to prepare a file which contains all the evidence the defence are likely to need to be able to advise their client on plea by the first court hearing. The aim of this is to encourage defence counsels to instruct their clients to plead guilty at the first hearing rather than have to request the court to set a date to hear the case. In cases that can be dealt with by the Magistrates in respect of sentencing powers a guilty plea at the first hearing can result in the case being dealt with on the same day and punishment meted out. This has obvious benefits in terms of court costs as well as bringing a speedy resolution for the victim of the crime. This is of particular importance with domestic violence cases where frequently prolonged delays in getting the case heard in the court can lead to retractions being made by the victim and the offender evading punishment.

According to the Sentencing Guidelines Council sentence reduction is justified because:

' a guilty plea avoids the need for a trial (thus enabling other cases to be disposed of more expeditiously), shortens the gap between charge and sentence, saves considerable cost, and, in the case of an early plea, saves victims and witnesses from the concern about having to give evidence.'

Have the reforms achieved their aims?



Although the intended aim of the reforms was to reduce crime and strengthen public confidence these have still not been achieved (The Times, 2008). With regard to public confidence many believe that the courts are being too lenient and that community sentences fail to compensate the victim for the harm caused. In a letter written by the Chairman of the Committee, the Right Honourable John Denham MP to the Chairman of the Sentencing Guidelines Council he makes the observation that in his opinion:

'it is clear that the general public does not fully understand the rationale for having discounts for pleading guilty.'

He goes further to suggest that in order to address this problem

'...the Home Office, in liaison with the Council, should be pro-active in seeking to extend public understanding of the sound reasons underpinning this policy.'

He also went on to states that:

'...the Committee considers that public confidence is diminished by the way indeterminate sentences are calculated and presented to the public. The very concept of applying a sentence reduction to an indeterminate sentence is very hard to explain to the public. It is the combination of the discount for guilty pleas and the halving of the overall sentence, in accordance with the Criminal Justice Act 2003, that gives rise to most controversy.'

In December 2007 Lord Carter was commissioned to carry out a review of the prison system and in particular to comment on the future of the use of prisons as a form of punishment. The review entitled 'Securing the future, Proposals for the efficient and sustainable use of custody in England and Wales December 2007' examined how the supply and demand for places in prison could be balanced. Lord Carter in the review commented that

'The increased prison population of the past decade is a result of a concerted and successful effort to catch, convict and detain for longer periods the most dangerous and serious offenders.'

The recommendations made by Lord Carter to tackle the issue of prison overcrowding included building of more prisons , larger prisons to be built and the closing down of the older and more inefficient prisons and a more structured framework for sentencing (Lord Carter, 2007).Lord Carter also went onto to recommend the modification of the use of custody for low risk offenders and encouraged the government to consider alternative remedies for these offenders so that custody could be reserved for the more serious and dangerous offenders.

Community punishments and their effectiveness.



In order to be able to comment on the success of the reforms it is necessary to consider the alternative punishments that have been introduced through the 2003 Act.

In issuing guidance to the SGC the Act offered the Council alternative punishments for offenders under the guise of community punishments orders. These orders included curfew orders, exclusion orders, attendance centre orders, supervision orders and action plan orders. Extended use of Anti Social Behaviour Orders was also encouraged which was further bolstered through the introduction of the Anti Social Behaviour Act 2003. The government considered that in many cases one of the above orders might be a more appropriate form of punishment to incarceration. In order to reach a conclusion as to whether this is the case it is necessary to analyse how effective community punishments have been in reducing crime levels.

In a report carried out by Peter Gould in relation to the effectiveness of electronic tagging he posed the question whether tagging had impacted on the level of crime. In his report he quotes Harry Fletcher from the National Association of Probation Officers as declaring that it is too soon to tell whether tagging will deter criminals from re-offending. In the reported Fletcher is quoted as saying

'...there is still no evidence that it has reduced crime or prevented offenders from committing further offences. What we don't know is what happens to the individuals once the tagging period has stopped. My assumption is that a large proportion of them regress'

If the assertion made by Fletcher is true this effectively means that the assertions made by the public that community punishments are soft options is essentially correct.

In a Home Office study conducted on electronic tagging in Manchester, Norfolk and Reading between 1995 and 1996 83 curfew orders were issued, with 47 of these being in one of the trial areas (Home Office, 1995). It was noticed in the study that the use of curfew orders increased in number over the year and that most of the 24% of orders that were revoked ended with the offender being given a custodial sentence instead. The survey also revealed that 9% of the offenders breached the curfew order either by not attending when they were supposed to of by interfering with the device (Mair and Mortimer).

Surveys carried out by the Home Office looking at the successes in reducing the prison population through the use of community penalties seem to suggest that these do not work in reducing the prison population. Success has often been judged through examination of reconviction rates (Aubrey and Hough, 1997). One such study carried out by the Home Office revealed that there was no significant difference between reconviction rates for those who had been imprisoned and those that had been given community penalties (May and Wadwell, 2001). The study carried out by the Home office considered a multitude of factors that might affect the reconviction rate such as the criminal history of the offender, unemployment, drugs, accommodation and finances (Mair and May).

Public perceptions of the CJS as reported in the British Crime Survey 2007-2008.



According to the BCS 2007-08 there has been a slight increase in the number of people who consider their local police are doing a good job. The survey reveals that in 2006-07 51% of those surveyed thought that the police were doing a good job compared with an increase of 2% for the 2007-08 figures. The survey also found that public confidence in the fair treatment of people by the police had increased although there was less confidence in the effectiveness of police in dealing with crime related issues. The majority of those surveyed were concerned that minor crimes generally received very little attention from officers with only 43% of those surveyed stating that they were confident in the way their local police dealt with minor offences. The overall opinion of the effectiveness of the CJS saw a slight increase, however, only 37% of those surveyed were confident in the system as a whole. The report also highlighted that the vast majority of those involved in the survey believed that crime was on the increase despite the statistics showing that there has been a decline in the last 2 years.

One of the primary reasons why public confidence in sentence reduction is lacking is due in part to the general perception, mentioned above, that crime is on the increase. In order to convince the public that sentence reduction is justified in some cases it is necessary to prove that incarceration is not the answer to crime reduction. The public, as a whole, tends to be distrusting of government statistics in relation to crime levels, and an influx in violent crimes in recent times has been manipulated to cause a panic amongst society. In this state of panic the public become blinded and have convinced themselves that incarceration is the only way to protect others from harm.

Conclusion

From the above it can be concluded that in some cases crime levels have reduced. This could be partly due to the alternative forms of punishment that the courts have been able to utilise. Research seems to suggest similar levels of recidivism for those released from prison and those that have been sentenced to community punishments. This could suggest that those that re-offend will continues to do so regardless of whether they have been awarded a custodial sentence or whether they have been given a community punishment order.

Public confidence in the criminal justice has not increased as anticipated which seems to suggest that the government need to do more to convince the public that incarceration does not solve the problem.

References

Aubrey, R & Hough, M, Assessing offenders' needs: assessment scales for the probation service Criminal Policy Research Unit, South Bank University, London Home Office Research Study.

Councell, R & Simes, J, Home Office Statistical Bulletin 14/02, Projections of long-term Trends in the Prison Population to 2009 England and Wales

Green, D, Prison Works. So why won't we admit it? The Times.

Halliday, J, Making Punishments Work: Report of a review of the sentencing framework for England and Wales.

Home Office (1995) Availability of a new community sentence: electronic monitoring of curfew orders. Home Office Circular 36/1995. London: Home Office.

Home Office consultation paper, Making Sentencing Clearer.

Home Office White Paper, CM5562, Justice for All.

Lord Carter's Review of Prisons, Securing the future: Proposals for the efficient and sustainable use of custody in England and Wales, December 2007,

Mair, G and May, C, Offenders on Probation, Home Office Research Study 167 A Research and Statistics Directorate Report

Mair, G. & Mortimer, E. (1996) Curfew orders with electronic monitoring: an evaluation of the first twelve months of the trials in Greater Manchester, Norfolk and Berkshire, 1995 - 1996. Home Office Research Study No.163. London: Home Office

May, C & Wadwell, J, Enforcing community penalties: the relationship between enforcement and reconviction, Findings 155, Home Office: London

Sir Robin Auld, Review of the Criminal Courts of England and Wales.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 17, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

Thanks

I would love to investigate a real life murder, only problem is some poor person has to die first. Figured if I asked for a volunteer to be killed it wouldn't be so bad lol. Although... there are 1 or 2 people who I know could be regarded as expendable... but enough about my dad lol.

Sorry bout the joke above but I was feeling mischievous after 6 hours doing graphical indexing lol, and I knew that if I didn't EW would have done so. At least mine was just a cheeky quip lol.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 16, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

Congratulations.

Thank you (from the bottom of my wine bottle)

I can now do murder enquiries. Any volunteer victims? lol
strugglingstudent   
Oct 16, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

Oh come on lol for goodness sake lighten up. I DID say it was a tongue-in-cheel comment. Surely that would indicate no malice intended just a light hearted dig lol.

You really need to get a sense of humour lol

Anyway nothing can upset me today I passed my exam and I'm off for a well earned drink lol.

Oh and very nice of you to admit to a typo but that was not exactly the error I was asking you to own up to. I was expecting you to admit to reading my post wrong and accept that I did not claim that essayacademy was a REPUTABLE company as well as the fact that I had no ulterior motive as you implied.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 16, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

You attacked me first, so you can go screw yourself.

Actually you attacked my post on essayacademy without any due cause
strugglingstudent   
Oct 16, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

a) demonstrate their total lack of grammar skills, which OBVIOUSLY demonstrates that the email writer is not an EFL writer.

Those are the reasons I made the post. Mostly the 3rd reason ie to lighten the mood of the forum by demonstrating the APPALLING grammar of the company and their LACK of integrity in trying to get me to write an essay regardless of my experience. Would you have challenged my motive if it were not for the ongoing banter between us? If you could get your head out of your ass you would realise that I actually do not give a damn about you and your crusade, but that I find it amusing the way you react to criticism so do it all the more just to prompt a reaction.

I still hear no admission that you got it wrong!! But hey Hell will probably freeze over before you would DARE to admit such a thing.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 16, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

And still you cannot say those 5 little words 'oops I made a mistake'.

When I commented on the support given to you by ********* inferring that they had an ulterior motive I did insert 'tongue-in-cheek' to indicate that this was done purely with the motive of winding you up.

I really do not give a damn who you work for if indeed you do work at all, however it would be nice for you to admit that you are wrong when you do get things wrong. It shows that you are actually human and not some automaton.

(holds hand to ear just in case WB is finally going to admit she read the post wrong and now realises that I was not inferring that essayacademy was a reputable or legitimate company and that there was no other motive in my post but to share my dealings with this company with the rest of the readers on the forum)
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

Really? Who provided that evidence? You? Oh, wait--it was me.

Did I ever claim that I was the one providing the evidence.... err No!

Why would I go to any of the places mentioned when I have never been to America anyway.

besides false accusations

The post I just made WAS NOT a false accusation it was a FACT. Your Just MIFFED cos you read the post wrong and thought I was proclaiming the site to be LEGIT. In actual fact I NEVER used the word LEGITIMATE at all in that post I referred to ALLEGEDLY REPUTABLE companies and DODGY companies. As usual you are not BIG enough to ADMIT you READ it wrong and accept the post as intended.

You must be very insecure if you are incapable of accepting that you are not PERFECT and INFALLIBLE and that EVERYBODY including YOU makes mistakes sometimes.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

Sorry, but you know darn well that the point of your post was to TRY to prove that "legitimate" sites also engage in fraud

That was not my intention at all. Just because you see ulterior motives in everything does not mean that everyone HAS an ulterior motive.

I am well AWARE that MANY people know that certain sites RIP OFF customers. I posted their email to

a) demonstrate their total lack of grammar skills, which OBVIOUSLY demonstrates that the email writer is not an EFL writer.
b) to show that they do not care about the academic qualification of the writer
and
c) for a little light hearted humour (well I certainly laughed when I read the poor sentence construction- and I enjoyed pointing out that asking me to write a finance paper was equivalent to asking Hans Christian Anderson to write War and Peace lol)

No shute, Sherlocke! Two-thousand and five called--it wants its newsflash back!

I didn't proclaim this to be NEWS I proclaimed it to be ONGOING. Besides how many times have you reminded us of the location of the SAME fraudulent sites. Please tell us NEWS not history. We ALL know where Academia Research is located and all their associate companies so you do not need to remind us in as many threads as possible.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

Actually no i didnt my post said i wrote to SOME legitimate companies AS well as SOME dodgy ones I DID not say that this company was legit in fact I think you will find my post infers that this is one truly dodgy company lol

I guess you should take a comprehension class so that you can read the post correctly lol

What companys' contracts have you seen Struggling?

I have read the contracts from UK Essays, Studyhood, Academia Research, essays-r-us and quite a few more. I think I might have a copy of the contracts saved on my home computer which I could dig out when I return from my course.

Anyway catch all you guys tomorrow I have to go revise for a 5 hour Holmes indexing exam tomorrow which I need to pass to switch to the major investigation team as an exhibits officer. Wish me luck lol
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008

Essayacademy.co.uk is NOT a legitimate site, so your test is meaningless.

I didn't claim it was a legitimate site if you read the post correctly. I said I had written to supposedly legitimate ones AS well as some dodgy ones. This I believe falls into the latter category as you can see from my replies to them etc.

With the appalling grammar comment I would have thought it was obvious that I was inferring that this company is dodgy

especially since i said

This should hearten your desire to give this company as wide a berth as possible.

before posting the communication with them. I just wanted to point out how bad the company is. Thought you would welcome such criticism lol
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

I was merely pointing out how admirable it is of ********* to protect you personally. I admire loyalty like that. It warms the cockles of my heart lol
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

Knew you would rise to the bait. I just couldn't resist sorry lol
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008

As discussed some time back I am doing a thesis on essay writing companies. As part of my research I applied to some of the alleged reputable companies as well as some of the listed dodgy ones. I have recently had a few replies since essay season is hotting up and thought it would be good to share with you all the communications I have recently had with essayacademy.co.uk. This should hearten your desire to give this company as wide a berth as possible.

When applying I told the company that my areas of specialty are UK law and criminology since I hold a degree in these areas. Their first reply asked if I could do a test essay on finance. I reiterated that this was not an area that I specialise in so please send a test essay in the subjects mentioned. They then sent me a test essay on arbitration and conciliation in Australia. I pointed out to them that Australian law was not the same as UK law and therefore I would not be fully equipped to undertake such a topic. Below is my email to them and their reply

UK Essay Academymy email to them

I can write on any aspect of UK law as that was my major at university. I can also do criminology which is universal (Most sources for this are american). On these topics I can guarantee quality work and have many textbooks and access to articles for these areas.

I have on occasion done psychology papers, and have access to textbooks as my daughter is studying this.

If you do not have any work in my areas of specialty then I guess you cannot offer me any work. I would noy be happy trying to tackle a subject i am unfamiliar with as i could not guarantee the quality of the work nor whether it was the standard required by the customer.

Many companies get writers to write on any topic regardless of whether the writer has any experience in those areas or not. I feel that it is wrong for a writer to try to write on a topic in which they have no formal qualifications as the work is likely to be inferior.

Regards

from support@essayacademy.co.uk

Hi,

Thanks for your replay, we thought that you get wrong idea.

When you are studying in university, the most benefit you get is how to learn by yourself by some research,

Which means the learning skill, not the skill you have learnt, when you work for the company, the skill you got in university is not enough for the need from the job.

For your application, you have to prove your ability to us, not ask us to provide your favorite test question,

Anyway, we are happy to provide that specific test question for you, but you know, the order is based on the

Market, if you only can cover small area, there are few people need the law and criminology, most of the law and criminology essays come from Australia, even this is your major at university, but you cannot write the topic.

We just suggest that you can improve your skill to suit for the market, not the market suit for you, if you really want to make money.

Even if you have passed our test, but we know the market more than you. We have to know the your writing and research capability, if you can not finish the Australia test question provided before, we have to say sorry that we can not deal with you.

Regards

EssayAcademy.co.uk

I have since replied back to them tonight as below

Hi there

I certainly did not get the wrong idea. Yes you learn research skills at university, however, you do not go out and buy text books on every topic going and so therefore you do not have the academic resources to be able to write on other topics.

I find it alarming that you have writers that write on topics that they have no experience in. How can you guarantee quality. It would be like asking Hans Christian Anderson to write War and Peace. I doubt he would have been able to make a successful job of it.

I guess this means that we wont be doing business.

As for being successful in writing I have been writing for customers for the last 4 years earning almost £20,000 per year. I think that is fairly successful. As for lack of customers, in the UK there are stacks of students studying law and criminology and many requiring assistance. I have been doing online tutoring for 2 years and have 15 private students who I assist. I was only applying in order to increase my workload and thought that you were running a reputable company. However, your suggestion that a writer can write on ANY topic is ludicrous and your grammar is appalling. I sincerely hope the quality of the work you supply is of a much higher standard.

I could not agree to work for a company that would pretend to a customer that an expert in that field had written the essay when I have no expertise in Australian law, business management or finance.

Anyway thought I would share this with you all as a warning that certain sites do not care whether their writers are qualified or not.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

They did, however, ask me to leave WB alone, so I'll have to respect that request

They like to protect their own (tongue-in-cheek) lol

With all due respect, I doubt that you have read the contract.

I have not seen the contract from ********* but have seen the contract from several other companies and none of them contained a no compete clause.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008
Essay Services / Academic help verification? [73]

Therefore, you stole money from the company.

Actually the very notion of a FREELANCE writer is that you CAN garner work from anywhere and by any means.

There is no stipulation in ANY contract with these companies that prevents the writer from promoting their own writng abilities and getting customers in this way. Freelancewriter could have just as easily emailed the posters on here and offered his services and no one would be the wiser. One of the problems with this site is that it encourages writers and companies to promote their own business, although that is purportedly not the intention of the site.

Most students prefer to go to the sites as it offers them a degree of protection if the work is substandard or plagiarised, however, with the reputation of many companies being attacked in this site it is hardly surprising that writers can pick up private work through this site.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 15, 2008
Writing Careers / Becoming a Freelance Essay Writer [28]

Thanks for replies. Ive been looking for a proper a job.

For someone who scored so high your use of grammar is appalling. It also sounds to me like you are hoping to just walk straight into a good job at a high level- get real! You will have to do the same as the rest of us and work your way up.

Despite my qualifications I am not doing the job I am qualified to do but that is life and I know if I persevere I will get there in the end. In the meantime I will continue as I am and keep working my way to the top.
strugglingstudent   
Oct 11, 2008

If a site has proven to NOT engage in fraud and false advertising, it it NOT a "fraudulent" site--period.

But this does not prevent the site from delivering substandard work.

IMO none of these sites can make a 100% guarantee on the quality of the work since the standard is dependent on the person writing for the company. Admittedly a reputable site should not tolerate poor standards of work, however, these companies do not have the time to carry out FULL quality control on all pieces of work ordered and usually only dip sample the work, ergo a substandard piece of work could easily slip through the net.

It really is a case of trial and error when choosing to get a site to do an essay for you. What students should bear in mind is that when purchasing an essay in this way it SHOULD be used as a guideline only and NOT as a definitive piece of work that they should submit as their own.

NO essay writing site can prevent the customer submitting the work as their own and the companies offering these services are acutely aware of this. They cover themselves from accusations of encouraging plagiarism by stating that the work should be used as a reference only, but know full well that MOST students who buy these essays are probably going to submit the work as their own.

What I would like to see is a company setting up that does not provide a completed piece for the student but that works alongside the student suggesting ways in which they could improve their own writing skills. I cannot see this proving popular for many of those who buy essays from any of the sites mentioned on this forum as the impression I get is that they do not want to have to do ANY of the work themselves.
strugglingstudent   
Sep 22, 2008

Maybe to settle the argument between you 2 you ought to run a survey to see how many people will no longer buy from these sites JUST because they NOW know that they lie about their location. That way you will be able to determine whether all this work warning people about their TRUE location was worth it.

I personally believe that MOST students have already worked out the a lot of essay companies lie about their abilities and location, but are not in the least bit bothered so long as they dont have to do the work themselves. Students invariably go for the cheap option IMO and so therefore are prepared to take the risk that the essay will meet their exacting standards.

I have a friend who writes for an essay company who told me the other day that one student wanted someone to do their online test for them- now that is laziness in its extreme. How can that student claim to be worthy of their degree when they haven't even done the ONLINE test set for them for the course?
strugglingstudent   
Sep 18, 2008

Plagiariam is not limited to non American and non English sites. All writers are SUPPOSED to provide a plagiariam free essay, however, even the most sophisticated plagiarism detectors cannot pick up all incidence of plagiarism and therefore even those companies that SUPPOSEDLY scan for plagiarism cannot be absolutely sure that the essay is plagiarism free.

In many cases students submit these BOUGHT essays as their own without any amendments or alterations and DO NOT use them as a source of research. This in itself amounts to plagiarism as those who do this are submitting the writers ideas as their own. As these are ORIGINAL ideas of that writer plagiarism software will not detect that the essay was written by someone else and so therefore the customer can PRETEND they did the work themselves.
strugglingstudent   
Jul 23, 2008

I think that it is just certain servers that are blocking it. I cannot get it through AOL server but can if i use internet explorer and google the site
strugglingstudent   
Jul 22, 2008
Writing Careers / UK Essays - writing for them? [48]

From the attached article it would appear they condone students submitting essays as their own

durham21.co.uk/archive.asp?ID=3973
strugglingstudent   
Jul 20, 2008

Also, my school doesn't only uses Turnitin, in which they would need a digital copy - why would you post so "angrily"?

I was not posting 'angrily' merely pointing out that there is no point to your post. You think you have been scammed but the plagiarism detector finds nothing so why would you think you have been scammed? By making an issue that you MIGHT have a plagairised paper invites the universities to check such places as Proquest since you seem to think this is the source of your paper. That was the point I was trying to make!
strugglingstudent   
Jul 20, 2008

Of course now that you have publicised on here your suspicions, there is always a danger that the university you attend might access this site and decide to check all essay submissions against those accessible on Proquest which means that if your essay was taken directly from someone else's work the university might just be able to trace the original even though your plagairism program did not detect any. In which case you are your own worst enemy as you have now drawn attention to the probable source of your paper.
strugglingstudent   
Jun 28, 2008

This is not the ONLY source that I am using for my thesis. This site demonstrates quite nicely that several students are looking for essays that they can use as their own without altering the content. Lavinia from your above commet you are suggesting that ALL students that visit this site use the essays as their own as in your OWN words 'STUDENTS WHO DON'T SUBMIT ESSAYS AS THEIR OWN WOULD HAVE NO REASON TO FREQUENT THIS SITE OR POST'
strugglingstudent   
Jun 25, 2008

I think he means that the version of English that foreign countries tend to teach is the American version.

That must make the English even more difficult to learn then it already is especially if an ESL writer is then going to write for a British student. The spelling of many words differs from the American version to the British version as does the grammar.
strugglingstudent   
Jun 25, 2008

However, these people are just the undeniable primary starters of the universal language

Think you might find that you are wrong in the origins of the English language inquirer. Check out the below link for the history of the English language. I thinl you will find that English originated in England lol

englishclub.com/english-language-history.htm
strugglingstudent   
Jun 25, 2008

ouch that hurt SS lol although I have ALWAYS maintained that submitting custom written essays as your own is wrong. In fact my thesis is on exactly that topic so I guess comments like that from Damocrian reinforce my theory that MANY students submit these essays as their own work.
strugglingstudent   
Jun 24, 2008

IF you buy an essay from an essay writing company AND then submit that as your OWN work WITHOUT ANY alteration or acknowledgement of the source then YES you are a CHEATER. How can you submit someone else'd work as your own, and then claim that YOU achieved that grade? NO you didn't YOUR writer did.
strugglingstudent   
Jun 23, 2008

I think you will find that MY CLAIM was that another company operates from the same unit a fact that you confirm in your own post above. Do you really think I am phased by your threats about a solicitor. If you cared to do a little research into the English legal system accusations made on a forum such as this cannot be pursued in the courts as the names used by the posters are not their real names and email addresses can be registered by anyone. There is no way to trace the true identity of the poster ergo there is no one to be named in court proceedings.

I have no intention of meeting anyone from the internet at any place ever. What do you take me for AN IDIOT. IF I decide to walk past the office space you claim to use then I will do so whenever I please.

Why would you want to meet at Golders Green that is miles away from Crawford Street? You might as well say let's meet in Finsbury Park - also quite some distance from Crawford Street.
strugglingstudent   
Jun 23, 2008
Essay Services / question - essay-writing.co.uk? [69]

Well, if he's got the guts, he'll post a sample of his work, and then we can all be done with the speculation (if we can trust that it's truly his work).

Well I have shown you an example of the rubbish he wrote for a friend of mine. Let's hope for all his customers sake that the other work he has done is a lot better than that one.
strugglingstudent   
Jun 22, 2008
Essay Services / Anyone used law-essay.com [39]

Since WB is so interested in grammar and punctuation I decided to look at some of the sample essays offered on ********* with a view of determining how good the writers there might be.

This particular sample is absolutely riddled with grammatical errors

*********.com/sample1b.html

Considering this is offered as a sample of the writers work it hardly instils a customer with confidence that the work will be of sufficient standard. You would think that the sample essays would be of excellent quality so as to convicnce a customer to want to use their services.
strugglingstudent   
Jun 21, 2008
Essay Services / Anyone used law-essay.com [39]

Oh yes please lol I would love a fund in my name lol

have NEVER stated that I control the banning, which you keep insinuating. I have already explained my role in a potential banning, which is limited to providing evidence to the moderator. The decision is up to him or her.

Then ask them to BAN me then lol. Bet they don't respond lol
strugglingstudent   
Jun 21, 2008
Essay Services / Anyone used law-essay.com [39]

I'll TELL you what happened--the results did not favor your baseless claims, and you think that the issue will go away if you keep putting it off. Sorry--not going to happen.

There are NO RESULTS because I have NOT followed up on the experiment. Yes I was HOPING to show that ALL companies would hire ESL writers however I DID NOT assert that they definetely would I said as you quoted yourself

If I get the job I will specifically see if they will let me write for a US student even though they know I am not in the US. That will blow your theory out the water that US companies will only get US writers for US students.

Emphasis on the word IF not WHEN. Now IF i had said WHEN I get a job that WOULD insinuate that I expected them to employ me. IF implies that I have no proof either way at present.

I also like how you typed "IF" in all caps, to prepare us for the results that will never arrive.

IF is in capitals to emphasise the fact that I was NOT asserting that I would DEFINTELY get employment but that I would post the results once the experiment had been completed. Oh and guess what I'M STILL NOT BANNED lol
strugglingstudent   
Jun 21, 2008
Essay Services / Anyone used law-essay.com [39]

Yet another pointless, bitter, childish, personal attack--all because because I crushed its arguments. Yawn. Come back when you have a "big girl" argument about which anyone actually gives a crap.

Oh dear don't get upset just because you cannot get me banned. I just wanted you to prove that you CAN persuade the moderator to ban people that upset you. Oh well never mind looks like I'm here to stay for a bit longer lol
strugglingstudent   
Jun 21, 2008
Essay Services / Anyone used law-essay.com [39]

Why? So you can then sign-up with a new username and claim that I own EssayScam.org? Nice try. I'm sure that one of the reasons that the moderator does not always take action is because of all the false accusations that will inevitably follow!

So you cant get me banned then lol? You are always harping on about what you CAN do so I just wanted PROOF since you are so CONSISTENT on demanding proof from others.

So as they say 'the proof of the pudding is in the eating'. IF you can get people banned then do it STARTING with me lol.

We're all still waiting for you to post--in the proper thread--your evidence to support your baseless assertion that all American and British companies hire unqualified, ESL writers.

I DID NOT assert anything of the sort. I said that as an experiment I would see if they would hire such writers. My hypothesis was that I believed they might. To test this I applied to several but then have not followed up on this due to a variety of reasons. Now it is the off season I doubt any will be recruiting so I might have to wait till things pick up before I can recommence this experiment. In the scale of things this is a low priority to me as it was only a notion I was testing, and I am not really bothered what results I get in either direction, especially since this is off topic from my disertation.

IF i recommence the experiment I will post the results whatever they might be - positive or negative. If you are so interested in the results why don't you try applying you seem to have a lot of spare time on your hands.