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nathraq   
Oct 09, 2009

I'm new here, but have been lurking for sometime now, reading though the various threads.

WritersBeware, I really enjoy your posts, and all the research you put behind them. I had to register here when you brought up that link, historypapers.org. The site is absolute filth. The grammar is horrendous, and a person can ascertain from the sporadic lack of articles in front of nouns throughout their articles on the site, (ie: a, the, an) that it is maintained by a ESL'er, and most probably a Slav, as there are no articles in the Slavic languages.

Thanks for the info. Hope I can contribute to the forums.
nathraq   
Oct 12, 2009

...and for this simple reason, I registered on the boards. The very fact that a.) Fracturegang's English is horrendous, and b.) is on one hand crying about how the U.S. and U.K based companies are cheating the education system (see first post), yet is trying defend hacked up ESL writers in the business of writing sub-par papers for unsuspecting end users (see post #15), is proving the point that alot of people have made here already in countless posts.

This thread just made my day :)
nathraq   
Oct 12, 2009

Fracturegang

forgetting to add a word to sentence due to hasty writing is one thing; having a total lack of the basics of standard modern English is another.

There are many good ESL writers out there. Are you saying you're one of them? Reading your posts on a casual, non-acedemic message board, and seeing the problems you have with just basic everyday vernacular kinda points otherwise, now doesn't it?
nathraq   
Oct 13, 2009

Fracturegang said:

If I were not afraid of being banished from this forum, I would f****k you to my heart's content.

This is the epitome of ESL at it's finest
nathraq   
Oct 14, 2009
Writing Careers / EssayWriters: Sweatshop Labour [17]

"I'm working part-time so far on contract basis - and I enjoy it! Money is never extra, and with EssayWriters it's both, income and practice of knowledge, and opportunity to do what I really love - writing. I'm hoping to make it the source of my main income".

Candace Pike, UK

and...

"I'm an aspiring writer. I love the experience I'm getting and the more money I make the more experience I get, but I'm mostly about getting my writing better. Even though, I'm trying to make this my full time job."

Simon Breedon, USA

LOL
nathraq   
Oct 22, 2009

In layman's terms understandable to a 2nd grader:

The fraudelent foreign scam company sets up a U.S./U.K landline offered by a forwarding company. Some also set up mailboxes in the U.S. (As WritersBeware has proven in the past), also utilizing a forwarding company, adding to the ruse that said scam-essay companies are legitimate US/UK based firms. The calls and mail are forwarded to the owners in the Ukraine, Pakistan, various countries in Africa, etc. Hence the deception of posing as legitimate companies with native US/UK writers to suck the potential customer in, when in the end, the buyer receives a poorly written or plagiarized paper written by an ESL'er, who is paid peanuts compared to what his counterparts in the US/UK are paid.

A potential customer starts using the power of Google to search for essay writing companies. A majority of the scam companies come up as hits. The unsuspecting customer browses through various sites offering essay-writing services, and is greeted with such disclaimers as: Written by Native English Speakers; all essays 100% unplagiarized; satisfaction guaranteed or your money back, etc. What the customer fails to realize at the time, is that his order is being forwarded to some guy/girl in a 3rd world country, who has a passing fluency in the English language, but can't understand basic everyday American/British vernacular, complex innuendos, and proper verb usage. The customer is therefore scammed, insofar as they thought that "Matt" in the US/UK, who has a masters in English Lit, was writing his/her paper on "Shakespeares use of Middle English", when in actuality, Habib in Punjabi was trying his damndest to bust out a paper to fill the order, at $2.50 per page, and with a 6th grade English proficiency.

That's why it's a scam. And as soon as these fools get outed, they close shop, and reopen again under a different website name, offering the same hacked up services as before.

All you need to do is use the "search" button at the top of the ES forum page, and see for yourself.

Just read through WB's and others 1000's of posts on the aforementioned scam companies to see that they are just that: scams.
nathraq   
Oct 27, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

I think this is pent up British nerd-rage due to those little skirmishes they lost against the Americans back in 1781 and 1812. Owing to the fact that a) they have horrible dental issues, b) the worst food in Europe, and quite possibly the world, and c) women that look like they fell out of the ugly tree and hit every branch on the way down, I can see how the Brits look for any possible means of degrading an American to try and make their pathetic, spotted-dick eating lives seem more meaningful.
nathraq   
Oct 27, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

Hey genius....How does racism play into a culture clash, especially if a) I am a white American, and b) you are a true-blue Brit?

You started with the attacks. I have yet to see your proof about this statement:

The dumbed down standards of Americans are well-known in the academic community. A university graduate in the USA will have reached about the same standard as a 17/18 year old in the UK (rerember only 31% have prose literacy); an 18 year old high school graduate in the US reaches the level of a UK 15/16 year old. And that is on average - very many schools, colleges and universities in the UK are dumbed down too, but we have to do that if people in the US and elsewhere are awarded degrees despite being functionally illterate and ignorant and un-intellectual (not to mention the millions who cheat...) Very many teachers in the US are also products of the same dumbed down school system, which is why you are probably so ill-educated my friend.

1. Your claims about Richard Ap Merrick (Richard Amerike) are totally unfounded, and speculative at best. It is theory, and theory only.

2. The Welsh Prince (Madoc) that supposedly set sail to the Americas and "mixed" with a Native American tribe is Welsh folklore, not fact.

3. British healthcare does NOT cover complex dental procedures, ie a person in need of a root canal could pay through the NHS roughly 46 pounds to have the tooth pulled (as recommended and provided by the Brit's healthcare system), or go private and pay 650 pounds for a root canal to save the tooth. Hmm....free healthcare, huh?
nathraq   
Oct 27, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

1. The claims about Richard Amerike are NOT accepted by high level academia. It is a theory. With all of your degrees, I am sure you understand the definition of THEORY. Show me one respectable acedemic that accepts this theory, outside of Welsh nationals.

2. I asked for proof of your claims about the American education system at the collegiate level being subpar to British institutions of the same level. Please provide the stats to back up your claims.

3. American cities haven't had the luxury of being bombed into oblivion by our enemies, and then rebuilt using the same American dollars under the Marshall Plan that could have been spent elsewhere.

4. The Brits, among other supposed European allies, seem to forget who saved their asses a few times during the past century. Nothing like sending American boys to do a job that British boys should have been doing for themselves (you can thank Mr. Chamberlain for that).

5. There is a reason America became the richest, most powerful nation ever created by humankind. It is our ingenuity, our diversity, and our compassion and moral fortitude that have built this nation after our total romping of the British in 1781. That rag-tag Colonial Army defeated the most powerful professional army of the time: The British Redcoats. Nothing has changed today. Same heart, same will for victory.

6. Nice rant about the American prison system, and nice leftist view on blacks being in prison because of racism. No rant about personal responsibility, huh?

7. People of all cultures are welcome here, and most enjoy the freedoms and security they could not have enjoyed anywhere else in the world, Britain included.

8. And I'll let Harvard take the Pepsi Challenge against any Brit university. If, as you stated, we are below par, then it should be no problem, right?

9. Negro was an accepted term up until the early 60s, when "Afro" became the standard. That has since been changed to "African" (ie African American). Welcome to the 21st century.

10. Still waiting for a world renowned British plate. If I go to a restaurant in France, and ask for something British, what would they send to my table? (besides an ugly waitress with bad teeth)
nathraq   
Oct 27, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

and by the way.. I apologize to my British friends for the comments I made to OxfordExpert(Melissa) about Brits in general. My comments were directed more at her, and her rabid comments about America in general.

Still waiting for her reply....
nathraq   
Oct 27, 2009
General Talk / ESL Essay Lecturers!!! [51]

Another baseless allegation.

For all of your supposed knowledge Melissa, you sure are lacking in the research department.

Now go do your homework, girlfriend
nathraq   
Oct 27, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

"By definition, no one born in the UK speaking English has an accent.".

This whole mindless rant just proved to me that you are NOT in fact British. Hiding between the lines are hints of a former Soviet-bloc style of de-education slanted against anything that is American, eh Melissa?
nathraq   
Oct 27, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

No surprise that the USA with their racist army was so cowardly not to enter WWII until over 2 years after the brave British had secured victory in the main. And only then to make a profit and boost their own economy.

Is this completely false and idiotic statement what you learned in an Eastern Bloc history class?

As i have pointed out the flaws in both this thread and the other, I once again ask you to conjure up information, this time regarding the British forces on the European mainland in 1941, and the way the had "secured victory" in order for the Americans (and the rest of the invasion force of 1944, including the Brits themselves) to have an easy go of it on mainland Europe.

Please tell me you do not write history essays. That, in itself, would be a travesty.
nathraq   
Oct 28, 2009
General Talk / ESL Essay Lecturers!!! [51]

Another rambling by a person of inadequate English proficiency.

And you have multiple mega-degrees from a top university in Britain? What does that tell us about the British education system?

Once again, post facts, not personal attacks. I asked you to back up this claim:

The situation is even worse is these teachers took their degrees in Africa or Asia.

and this one:

Pheeks or whatever your name is: yes, in fact, we have to dumb down our standards because otherwise those at British universities would not be graduating whilst those in America were graduating with good degrees.

Your hacked up writing skills and English proficiency are just putting you deeper into the s-i*hole you created for yourself. Just look at the two quotes I posted, and any native or proficient English speaker will notice the mistakes in grammar buried within.

So answer the questions I posted, or GTFO
nathraq   
Oct 28, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

And FYI, America was named after the Brit Richard Ap Merrick, the chacellor of King Henry Tudwr in 1497, and not some insignificant explorer called Amerigo: THAT is the modern consensus based on all evidence.

Hey Einstein, I asked you to back up this claim, and to provide names of the top researchers and academics that support this theory, outside of Wales. Still waiting....

Ever realise that Britain stood ALONE saving the world from 1940 when France fell till 1941 when Russia entered the war

Russia entered the war in 1939, with the invasion of Poland from the East, while Germany invaded from the West. Pick up a book sometime there genius.

The cowardly, jewhating Americans didn't declare war on Germany - Germany declared war on the USA! Your were FORCED into the war

Germany declared war on the US after the US declared war on Japan for Pearl Harbor.

MODS: please do something about this person and the belligerent name-calling, race-baiting, and straight-out lies that are being posted by them
nathraq   
Oct 28, 2009
General Talk / ESL Essay Lecturers!!! [51]

back up your claims, that's all we're asking

You said you have multiple nerd-degrees from a top university. Put 'em to use there girlfriend, and back up your statements.

It's that easy
nathraq   
Oct 28, 2009

Insane claims by OxfordExpert, a self proclaimed multiple degree holder from a top British University:

These are just a few of the insightful statements posted by Melissa, a high level academic and expert in English language usage.

Now, either back up each and every one of these statements with fact, or push on to somewhere else.

No rants, no name-calling. Just use your overpowered IQ in addition to basic research techniques, and address these staements.

"It's so easy, a caveman can do it"
nathraq   
Oct 28, 2009
Essay Services / Non-Plagiarized-TermPapers.com [29]

WB: any info on non-plagiarized.com? I have been trying to gather information on them, but using regular net research, I end up in circles. On their site, they link to the following addresses , and I can't understand a legitimate business linking to competitors:

perfecttermpapers.com
writingservicescompany.com
top-term-paper-sites.com
nonplagiarizedessays.co.uk
papersonline.us
freeessays123.com
onlineessays.com
essaytoday.com
ghostpapers.com
newavessays.com
with-honors.com
abtermpapers.com
custom-essay.net

I have taken screenshots of the misspellings on their site, and got the Google surface view of the building they are supposedly in. Something strange indeed.
nathraq   
Oct 28, 2009
Essay Services / Non-Plagiarized-TermPapers.com [29]

Thanks WB.

I asked about this site in particular because of their claimm of using 100% American writers, in addition to their address being stated on their site at

Writing Services Company

47-47 36th Street
Suite # 10313
Long Island City, NY 1110 (last digit cut off)

Using Google Streetview, the building looks like a run down heap. Whois lists Susanne Varzi in Sunnydale, CA (whom you listed) as owner of the site, which got my attention. Also the fact that they claim to have been around since 1996.

Also, their "sample" paper leaves much to be desired:

Term Paper on Hate Speech on College Campuses

Introduction

As colleges struggle to handle the various differences their students and faculty embody, the problem of "hate speech" has become a focal point of educational erudition and policy-making. In the most deliberate and alarming cases, hate speech is projected to degrade or disgrace those at whom it is directed, usually colored people, gays, lesbians, the physically or mentally challenged, and women, regardless of their sexual orientation, race, religion or ability. Less disturbing examples include insensitive or careless comments, jokes, and other expressions that are painful to those to whom they are directed, regardless of the intent of the person by whom they are spoken or written.


Notice the use of "colored people", a term which is pretty much frowned upon in acedemia, especially in the U.S. Would a master's degree holder use such a description in a collegiate level essay?

Just bringing them up due to their claims of using only American writers, which I find rather hard to believe.
nathraq   
Oct 29, 2009
General Talk / ESL Essay Lecturers!!! [51]

This is getting nowhere fast.

Prove your statements with facts, or leave. It's that simple. Or is it?
nathraq   
Oct 29, 2009
Essay Services / Non-Plagiarized-TermPapers.com [29]

thanks for the info. I just learned something new from the screenshot you posted. What a money making racket that is, using NY addresses to present themselves as legitimate American companies.
nathraq   
Oct 29, 2009
Essay Services / Non-Plagiarized-TermPapers.com [29]

People of color," however, is now considered an appropriate and even preferable term, for whatever reason....

that is true. But the wording "colored people" is considered outdated in American English.
nathraq   
Oct 30, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

I'm waiting, Wendy Bollox aka WritersBeware. You are guilty of libel you know - so you shoudl retract that or I may well get my 'associates' to pay you a visit in the United States of Criminal Scum and hear your apology in person

Threatening another poster? MODS: Please take care of this asap!
nathraq   
Oct 30, 2009
General Talk / ESL Essay Lecturers!!! [51]

libel lol

Everyone here is pretty much in a consensus about you.

I asked you many times throughout three different threads to post proof about your idiotic claims:

The situation is even worse is these teachers took their degrees in Africa or Asia (not trustworthy in general).

Pheeks or whatever your name is: yes, in fact, we have to dumb down our standards because otherwise those at British universities would not be graduating whilst those in America were graduating with good degrees.

And FYI, America was named after the Brit Richard Ap Merrick, the chacellor of King Henry Tudwr in 1497, and not some insignificant explorer called Amerigo: THAT is the modern consensus based on all evidence.

Ever realise that Britain stood ALONE saving the world from 1940 when France fell till 1941 when Russia entered the war

These are just four of the numerous idiotic claims made by yourself. You have been asked several times over to back them up. You have skirted answering for the claims by resorting to name-calling, race-baiting, and straight up lying.

Once again, with as much respect as you can muster; please back up your claims that a) only 30% of Americans can read, b) The British education system has been dumbed down due to Americans, and c) Americans are rabid anti-semites

You have skirted the questions in 3 different threads. Time to buck-up.
nathraq   
Oct 30, 2009
General Talk / ESL Essay Lecturers!!! [51]

skirting the issue again OxfordExpert

it's this simple:

We still haven't dumbed down to retard levels like the USA but standards have gone down during the past 20 years. The fault of American dumb culture? Yes, in part

OxfordExpert should have responded: No, I can not back up that claim, but I thought of it all by myself using my super-nerd skills I obtained through my massive schooling in Britain.

And FYI, America was named after the Brit Richard Ap Merrick, the chacellor of King Henry Tudwr in 1497

OxfordExpert should have responded: This is a theory puported by various Welsh nationals, not the acedemic world as a whole. But since it is an attack against America (albeit a passive one), I just thought I'd throw this cheap shot in for kicks.

Ever realise that Britain stood ALONE saving the world from 1940 when France fell till 1941 when Russia entered the war

OxfordExpert should have responded: I was totally off the wall with this statement, sorry. I mistakenly thought that the USSR entered WWII in 1941, when they actually entered in 1939, with the Eastern invasion of Poland. Since I gained most of my elementary education in a former Eastern Bloc communist country, we were told that Mother Russia saved the world from capitalism and fascism.

I just did 3 for you to get the ball rolling. You should have no trouble now keeping said ball moving.

If you respond with an insult or other insane America-bashing response, then you just proved my point that you have absolutely no formal university education whatsoever, and basically have no idea what you're talking about. And that will be my proof that you were asking me for.
nathraq   
Nov 08, 2009
Writing Careers / Who can call English their own? [138]

Because I am British and highly educated I know such things; because you are a retard and know no history and have no culture, you do not.

lol Ms. genius here still hasn't answered the numerous questions presented to her about her fallacious comments she had made previously, especially concerning her total lack of knowledge on the British health care system; her anti-semetic and prejudiced comments about certain ethnic groups; her claim that the USSR entered WW2 in 1941; and that America was named after a Welsh gentlemen.

Not only does she skirt the questions, and has been doing so for weeks now, she tries these comebacks that are just plain idiotic.

So superbrain, what ya got to say now?